Legault Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 Tell me what you think. I always wanted to try a Fire Emblem, or Golden Sun styled RP. I would give detail of the titles and what they do. Like archer, or mage. It would take place in a world that has bassicly no technology. Somewhat like Final Fantasy, or Fire Emblem. The lords of the land, or kings if you will, are becoming less and less friendly, not to mention more and more hatefull. A group of people (Or demons, or half beasts, depending on what you choose) will find out something. An evil organization is doing this, by useing magic to manipulkate the minds of the poor kings, except one. The people would go on a sorta quest to stop the organization, and the evil king who hired them to begin with. Of course there'd be more to it. Mission's, side missions, and stuff like that. But of course I could use help. Maybe someone to help, like a co- creator. And advice would be nice. If you have any, throw them around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadSeraphim Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 [COLOR=Indigo][SIZE=1][FONT=Arial]It needs work, and I'm not just talking a lick of paint. My main qualm is the plot is so damned cliche. Brain-controlled rulers? Check. Evil organization? Check. Magic and classes? Check. As of now it doesn't even say [i]why[/i] random adventurers are going out to stop this organization. It just says they'll 'find out something'. I understand that this is still conceptual, but come on... Also, the bit about the mind-controlled kings was damn confusing. It took me a while to figure out that the one king not being manipulated was hiring the organization.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legault Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Well like I said, I'm only throwing the idea around. The classes thing is just something I'm a fan of. And magic too. The controlled kings thing seemed original, but if you say so, I'll change the plot. But it did seem interesting at the time. Oh well.... Hey, maybe you could help me? I'm bassicly only an alright rp fighter, and I just create characters pretty quick. Thing is I keep them. (Just to say, I have about 56, or 57.) And you do seem to able to point out plot mistakes, and things that just suck. So if it's okay, would you care to help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadSeraphim Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 [quote name='Legault']Well like I said, I'm only throwing the idea around. The classes thing is just something I'm a fan of. And magic too. The controlled kings thing seemed original, but if you say so, I'll change the plot. But it did seem interesting at the time. Oh well.... Hey, maybe you could help me? I'm bassicly only an alright rp fighter, and I just create characters pretty quick. Thing is I keep them. (Just to say, I have about 56, or 57.) And you do seem to able to point out plot mistakes, and things that just suck. So if it's okay, would you care to help?[/quote] [COLOR=Indigo][FONT=Arial][SIZE=1]You may want to look in the direction of FFVIII, FFIX and FFX-2 for that controlled leader plot device... Oh, and I'll help, if you post more. A tip for now would be breaking up your posts into paragraphs. ;) Makes them much easier to read.[/SIZE][/FONT][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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