Discuss Different RPG

[Albel the Wicked]

OK OK OK OK I think that this RPG is actually a turning point in my continuous suck fest of RPGs. Alright, I know that it might be lame, but this is a Mario RPG. Here is some of it.



As Bowser sat, glumly in his castle, after yet ANOTHER defeat by Mario.
" I tell you what, I'm really starting to get angry by being defeated by Mario. This is probably the fifieth time he's beaten me! That's it! I keep relying on my same strength every single time I go against him. I don't even train or anything. Well, this time will be different. TROOPS! Get ready to help me strengthen myself."

"You mean, training, Lord Bowser?"
"Huh? No you fool! I plan on cheating. We're going down to the lab, so get the best scientists on this."
"Yes sir"

For weeks, Bowser's minions toiled and worked to make Bowser three times more stronger then he was before. Finally, they finished their new project.
"YEESS! I can definetly beat Mario now!" As Bowser walked off, the koopa minions quivered in fear at the creation.
Princess Peach was sitting in her bedroom thinking about Mario. Toadsworth was there with the other servents. Sudenly a giant explosion came through the wall. Smoke was everywhere. The toads couldn't see anything, but they did hear the Princess screaming for help. When the smoke cleared, the last thing Toadsworth saw, was the Koopa Clown Cart flying off in the distance.
"Hmmm, this is something new for Bowser. He's never been one to take such measures, as to blowing up a wall. He must be getting desperate or he's taken to many bonks of the head from Mario. Nonetheless, I should go and tell Master Mario" Said Toadsworth.
Toadsworth rushed to Mario's house, in hopes that he would stop Bowser. As he went inside, he only saw Luigi.
" Master Luigi, where is Master Mario?"
"He went to Bowser's Keep to save the Princess"
"What? He already knows? How?"
"I don't know why, but Bowser flew his Koopa Clown Cart near the house and he heard the Princess cry for help. I think that Bowser has taken too many bonks on the head from my brother."
" Well, I must to see that the Princess is returned safely."
"I guess I'll go too. *Sigh* Not like I got a whole lot of other stuff going on."
As they both went to Bowser's castle they notice that the gate is wide open.
"Bowser has made this too easy for us to follow"
"Your right"
"Proceed with great caution"
As they both crept through the gate, they noticed that is was completely dark. Once they were both all the way through, the gate slammed shut.
"AHHHHH!" They both screamed.
"MUAHAHAHAHA!" They heard a screachy voice say. "You are fools for running right into my trap!" As he said that Luigi sees his brother, on the ground uncosious.
"MARIO!" said Luigi, as he rushed to his brothers aid. When he was almost at his side something slams into Luigi.
"Master Luigi!" Just then the lights go on and Toadsworth sees Bowser. "MY WORD!"
"MUAHAHAHA! Fascinated by my new look? It's quite something isn't it?" Toadsworth was in total fear as he saw that Bowser was completly metal. His red eyes were glowing and his steel shell was covered in crome. Just as his claws were.
" HEHEHE! Tell those fools to actually send me a challenge!" Bowser then grabbed Toadsworth, went to the window and threw him at castle.
When Toadsworth landed, he went through the hole in the castle and onto Princess Peach's bed. "My word! Bowser is much too powerful for the Mario Bros. I don't know what on Earth I shall do. Hmmmmmmm, I know! I believe Master Mario said that he met some warriors that were quite good. What were some names? Hmmm, I do believe he said that one of them was called Link. Oh yes, also Samus, Marth, and I guess I'll hire Yoshi. OH! I wasn't here at the time but I wonder if it were posible to summon Geno. But oh, I can't just have these old warriors, I must summon at least a couple of new ones. Maybe about three? Yes. I'll have to interview each one of them to see if they are any good"



That is it. That's what I have. You think that it would be good?