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The Great Conflict


Lord Naraku
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How does this sound everyone??? Its a new Manga Im working on. Its called "The Great COnflict." If any one has seen Gundam(I hope you have!) Its sort of like that....The Eath orce and forced to fight against the Space forces Crystal. The main character Warren Shades...2nd Lieutenant of his team. His Father Yasohiku Shades is the captian of the Space forces...he's killed later on when Crystals "Secret Weapon" destroys the Battleship Colony Destroyer he is on in space. He has three teammates Rin Gardener, Randy Harrison, and Kin Rider. Rin joins the army after Crystal kills both her parents when they destroy her fathers ship.
Erin Rider is the leader of Crystal, and the brother of Kin. They had different views of the war, and split to the two teams. And the other Main "Bad Guy" is Nieba Runen, the Admiral of Crsytal. He dies when the colony Ranger...that hes on is blown up by a misfire of one of Crystals Ships.....

So how does is Sound???

Lord Naraku
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This sounds like a pretty interesting idea. As a big fan of Gundam, I would happily read it. However, what is something that really sets it apart? A twist that moves the whole thing in a new direction? I'd still read it, but there should be something different about it.
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There will be something different I'm just not sure what that twist will be. I'm still thinking about it...the only process I have on it is the character profiles, and the names of the battleships/transport ships and there weapons. So I'll keep you informed as I go along.

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