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[Guest Y4KUZ4]

tell em if ya like this...now i spent ALOT of time thinking about this so it shouldnt be too bad...but this will definitley NOT be in shonen jump thanks to blood and cussing.

---YAKUZA---

This story is about the Yakuza gang in japan.Kessai,an 18 yearold who didn't have any money so he was looking for work.And he stumbled upon the Yakuza gang...who wouldb'e killed him,but he asked for work and now he's a grunt in the Yakuza gang.His boss,Tsuba,is very demanding and for some reason , has potassium cyanide in his spit.

A few days after Kessai joined the gang,his mother dies.Her eyes rolled up into her head,and green skin,with her veins popping out...a common effect of [U]cyanide[/U] .As Kessai tries to find links to how she died,more and more reports of [U]women[/U] in his gang have died of the same thing.The night after,the kills his partner,Sokoda,driven insane to the fact that he does not knot who killed his mother.

Just when he was about to pull the trigger of a 9mm into another of his partner's forehead,he stops and remembers the cyanide.He takes the gun away and apologizes...A few nights later,he shoots Tsuba(his boss)in the head while he was asleep. -END-




---Preview of chapter 2---

The Yakuza gang gets a new boss,Gyunabe.Byunabe is forceful,mean,and makes his men carry out the deadliest of missions...And those who fail these missions,were to commit [I]seppukku[/I] (a death ritual,a harsh form of discipline where one slices his stomach,a slow,very slow,brutal death).Kessai witnesses seppukku on the newest member,Bobibo,because Gyunabe simply didn't like his name,imagine what Kessai is about to go through...


So? Whatcha think!?

[Zero Tolerance]

It's sound really interesting. But why does that guy have potassium cyanide in his spit? I dunno, but it seems really weird. But whatever.

[Sinthae]

I think you should go along with it. It does sound interesting.