Writing I don't need time [PG]

[wiccansamurai]

A poem I wrote about my current boyfriend. Ummm yea. Anyway, I think there's room for improvement on it. Any C+C would be appreciated.

I don't need time


Honey, why do you sound so sweet
when I'm talking to you...
on the telephone?
I'm hangin' up this thing right now,
can't take this anymore.
Need to be alone.

So what if I cared about you?
That was before today.
Nothing is the same.
Yeah right, I don't need you no more.
I'm done with all of that.
Everything has changed!

Gotta go, can't stay,
tired of the way you play,
I don't need time.
just need to get away
I'm gonna 'cuz you're no fun,
gotta come undone!

You always talk so nice to me,
how funny is the truth,
how little that you care.
Rough time, I used to look for you,
Wanna know what I found?
You were never there.

Gotta go, can't stay,
tired of the way you play,
I don't need time.
just need to get away
I'm gonna 'cuz you're no fun,
gotta come undone!

I'm not sayin' you weren't tryin
but you weren't tryin hard enough.
I'm not sayin' that I hate you
but I hate the things you do.

Do you remember laughing over
little brothers and our homework?
Laughter that we shared?
All that time we spent together
forced me to realize:
I don't really care.

Gotta go, can't stay,
tired of the way you play,
I don't need time.
just need to get away
I'm gonna 'cuz you're no fun,
gotta come undone!