Writing Ruined yourself [PG]

[Magdalena]

[size=1]Doesnt have much rythm and was kinda written fast, Constructive critisism and Rate this please~

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It's ridiculous how,
Everything you say gets to her that way.
And if she couldn't understand
You'd turn and walk away.

It kills to see the way she crys
When you turn your back again.
From bitter tears she'd ask me
If I'd always be her friend

Why you make her feel so alone
Is beyond anything I comprehend
She'd give you anything you want
I wont let her get hurt again.

When all is said and done
I know what it is you do.
Cocain isnt the answer, kid
Snort away, I bet you think you're cool.

Before you think to come back running,
Think about this one thing
You tell her what it is you do
Or I'll be coming after you.

This is a threat from me to you
I'll tell you exactly what will happen
If you try to bring her down to your hole
I'll be your every fear

Watch out when you swap those goods
Because I'll be watching you
Every little thing you do.

My bestfriend means the world to me
She obviously means nothing to you

I know where you sleep
I know how to shoot
And when I find a .45
I'll press it against your forehead.

Thats exactly what you're doing to yourself
Snorting your cocain
You're killing your brain with every sniff
Until nothing left remains

Who cares if your dad beats your mom?
I don't.
Who cares if he comes at you too?
No one does.

You could tell someone
You're life isnt as bad as you think it is
Someone always has it worse
You better be listening to this.

You obviously don't see the good you have
And I know you don't deserve it.
Let her go, just go away.
You've ruined youself.

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