Art My Oekaki

[naota]

[COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1]Well,here is my 3rd ever attemp of making a Oekaki.I like this one alittle but it can be better WAY BETTER.Believe me if I practice as much as I did like some other guys that I drew with on a picture chat thing I would be the best lol. Anyway your comments are needed and sorry the picture is kinda small.

[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/3rdattempt.bmp]Click Here[/URL]

|Also if anyone wants to know where the picture chat is which is a chat room where you get to make oekaki's with talented oekaki artists I can pm you!|[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Ezekiel]

[COLOR=DarkSlateGray][SIZE=2][FONT=Book Antiqua]Hey that's pretty good! I know how hard it is to Oekaki (I'm on Oekaki Central) especially when only using a mouse. I've done a few myself and really, they took me ages to get to the standards I'm at O_o;; But if this is only your third picture then you're doing great, I think I've done about 20 up to now and I still find it hard.

The only thing I'll say about this is that his arm is too short, if he had his hands in his pockets in real life I believe that the arm would be bent and you would see the wrist and maybe the top of the hand...but then again, if he has deep pockets....>_>;;

But still, Oekaki with a mouse is hard (I'm assuming you aren't using a tablet?) so this is good.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

[naota]

[COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1]I did two new Oekaki's to put up,I am getting alittle better each time but whatever. I did a Shippo pic but it was erased :smirk: .

Here Are The Pics|[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/oekaki1.bmp]Pic 1[/URL] , [URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/oekaki2.bmp]Pic 2[/URL]

More comments please![/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Trigun 11]

I like them. When I look at them both Alot of Linkin Park songs come into mind....Like Figure .09 or Breaking the Habit. They both have a dark-esque or whatever feeling to it. Some of the detail could be better though

Pic 1 8.9/10
Pic 2 8.0/10