Art InuYasha and FF7: Advent Children Drawings

[Japan]

[COLOR=Navy]I drew InuYasha and Cloud from Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children obsessively three weeks ago or so and I finally scanned them in. What do you think? Comments please.[/COLOR]

[IMG]http://img29.exs.cx/img29/7578/InuYasha_squat.jpg[/IMG]

[URL=http://img22.exs.cx/img22/9238/InuYasha_kagome.jpg]http://img22.exs.cx/img22/9238/InuYasha_kagome.jpg[/URL]

[URL=http://img26.exs.cx/img26/4613/Instant_ramen.jpg]http://img26.exs.cx/img26/4613/Instant_ramen.jpg[/URL]

[URL=http://img22.exs.cx/img22/7931/Advent_Children-Cloud.jpg]http://img22.exs.cx/img22/7931/Advent_Children-Cloud.jpg[/URL]

[vegeta rocker]

The proportions are kinda off and the lines look like they were done with a big fat eyeliner pencil.
Keep trying!

[CrimsonDreamer]

There's potential there. I would say that the primary thing you have to work on is anatomy. Even though drawing anime has it's own set of anatomical rules, there is still a structure to it all. Maybe practice on underdrawings, or even check out a book that your favorite anime artist has compiled. Secondly, I agree (though not as bluntly as vegeta rocker) that the lineweight could be better. The basic principal of line is thick to thin as you move back on space. Things that are further back should have a thin, light line, and things that are close up need a thicker, darker line. Even consistent lines are nice when they are solid (either black marker or pen, or colored lines like in cartoons). Just keep trying. 90% of being a great artist is persistence.

[Mimmsicle]

[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1][COLOR=Navy]*giggles* I absolutely [I]adore [/I] 'Instant Ramen' ! That droopy face is so comical and really mirrors Inuyasha's more dense looking moments ;p

Somewhat unrelated, but when will we be able to see more of your carpentary and other artistical ventures ? ^_^[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]

[Syk3]

[quote name='chopsticks']i think that ur drawing is great coz u draw better than some of the people that i know!!!!![/quote]You need to improve your constructive criticisms. A good start would be to look at what other members have to say, and read the sticky on such at the top of the forum.