Writing Unanswered [E]

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[size=3][font=Arial][u]Unanswered
[/u]~Marc Tuminaro~[/font][/size]

[font=Arial][size=3]Twenty years have past and even now I ask[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]What is the point of being here?[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]I?ve done it all with this duration of life[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Yet others say I have so much to see[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]And so much to live for?[/size][/font]

[font=Arial][size=3]The challenge just isn?t here anymore[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]The simple life is ill forgotten[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]New ideas seem less extravagant [/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Happy faces shadowed with sadness[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Promises made but never followed[/size][/font]

[font=Arial][size=3]Tears made from half faced people[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Those that swear they never lie[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Then one day they do[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Do they do it for acceptance or for themselves?[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Ever contemplating about the feelings of others[/size][/font]

[font=Arial][size=3]Yet that leaves me with just one last question[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Friends, family, nobody seems to know the answer[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Religions ponder day in and out[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Philosophers always questioning [/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]What is the point of being here?[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]Some things are just better left unanswered[/size][/font]

[BlueYoshi]

Well, this is certainly a change from the sort of stuff I usually see around here lol.

I'm no expert at this, but one thing I did notice while reading your poem was a lack of rhythm, as in I had to pressure myself into continuing reading on. Still, I like how basic it is; not very compelling, but one thing for sure, there is a meaning deep down, which I never get around to working out.

Maybe someone else should have a shot at it.