Writing Listen to this new story I made up! [PG -- V]

[Guest Tantalus]

Its called Dark Revolutions. The story takes place in March 2006 and its about five teenagers who? well, they have a secret and I wont give it away until I get to that part of the story. This part isnt the secret, but theyve been messing around with magic, darkening their auras to unlock their powers. Arie has a mix of all powers and she is the leader of the five. Tantalus is next in command and is dark and enigmatic. He has firy hell powers just like me. (I made Tantalus to look and act a lot like me, so thats where I got my screen name.) Manuel has regular dark powers and is the oldest and strongest phisicaly. Lilith has void powers including wind tunnel spells, and a dangerous glare. And Grigor is the Silencer who puts an end to lives. Thats it for now. Ill post some more next time. Ciao!





Well, heres the first part to give u an idea of whats going on:

Chapter 1: Arie and Tantalus

It starts at Halcion High on a regular day in March 2006. Im just gonna leave out the teacher's blathering away about the Carbaniferus Period out of most of the story. Arie Taranis is nodding off as the teacher drones on about pointless stuff like coal deposits. "Tell some one who cares," she thinks, as she lowers her head and her dark brown hair covers her face. "Good thing its last period, we need toget some planning done."

Arie tells us this part hertself: "Yeah, I know everything seems normal, but me and Tantalus have a secret. I just cant tell you it yet?" Arie is about five foot eight and dressed in a black tanktop, black boots with stileto heels, and dark gray pants whos legs can be zipped of in several places.

A note blows by and Arie stops to read it. "Arie, get Lilith at the Junior High and meet me you know where. -Tantalus" She rites out a response real quick. "Tantalus, got your message. See you there. -Arie"
"Arie Taranis!" the teacher shouts out.
"Yes, Ms Mason?" Arie replies.
"Could you tell the clas what the two sub periods of the Carbenifarus are?" Ms Mason says sharply.
A bead of sweat apeers on Aries face. "Uh? Paliozoic?"

(Thats all I can rite for now. But Ill be back some othe night. Ciao!)
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