SilverCyclone Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 I have an idea for a new manga, but it needs some bugs worked out... When Nicholas was murdered, it was because he was in the wrong place at the wrong time. He had always held grudges, but this was beyond hate. He would do anything to get revenge on the ones who killed him. Anything. What better way to gain revenge then by shaking hands...with the Grim Reaper? Nicholas has come back, not truly dead, not truly alive. He exists only to kill his murderers. He has four days to gain vengeance. He wields Death's scythe, and has no emotions short of pleasure and anger. He will kill any who slow him down, even if they do not deserve to die. But it will be worth it. Besides, if those he kills deserve it, they will go to heaven. And if they dont, they will go to Hell. Every man lives. Not every man truly dies... Any suggestions on how to...pump the plot up? Oh, and some of you will recognize the last phrase. I have Nicholas, Death, and a murderer named Lance as characters, but I still dont have all the bugs worked out. Once I finish it, I will post a nice picture of Nicholas in his before/after phases :devil: . Should be ready this weekend. Oh, and its entitled Dead Grin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1] Hmm... You should probably put a counter at the end of each chapter showing how many days left and more beings he has to kill ala Battle Royale. Something like: [indent]Lance Whatsisname, status: Dead 3 murderers left 1 day to go[/indent] Open the story up with the death of the first murderer then insert Nicholas' death as a flashback immediately after. Love and Peace! :love2: [/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverCyclone Posted September 25, 2004 Author Share Posted September 25, 2004 I had been thinking of making each chapter "Day *" but I like your idea much better. The attached picture is Nicholas before he died, and after. This is the final version of him. I had two other sketches, one of which he had short hair and was much buffer. But, I settled on this. Any comments? I am working on a sketch for Death, and a group shot of the murderers. Death will (hopefully) be ready by Sunday, and the group shot by the end of the week (friday). Oh, and yes, that is a mini scythe that the live one is holding in his hand (it has a purpose, but Im not telling yet) EDIT: I added a colored picture of Lance...Looking back on many of my drawings, I appear to have a thing for psychotic eyes...anyways, any critique would be greatly appreciated! :D Oh, and the picture for Death has been giving me trouble so I wont post it just yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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