Writing Poem about a car [E]

[2010DigitalBoy]

people have come
from near and far
to hear my poem
about a car

about the car
that takes me to
any place
that I may choose

I go to the mall
I go to the bank
I go to Lowes
To buy a plank

I build a clubhouse
in a tree
with some boards
my freind gave me

Finally
I build the door
and fill it with
things I adore

I couldn't have done it
without the car
now you may leave
to near and far


So do you like it?

[Godelsensei]

[COLOR=Gray][FONT=Courier New]It's like a rage against the most extreme of Environmentalists disguised as a quarky poem.

I like it. : D

Not that I'm for ruining the environment or anything, but I still love cars and whatnot.

It's a poem that made me smile. : )[/FONT][/COLOR]