Sword Breaker Posted September 28, 2004 Share Posted September 28, 2004 Astray In the corridors... I walk alone... The memories... Forever... Since I cried of sorrow... I'm here standing on the edge... Staring out at the moon... Which is why... I'm going to live my life as i choose... Until I fall... I would like... To walk alone in the snow... Its always been so hard to do... Not my fault... I've got nothing to lose... Which is why... I'm going to live my life as I choose... Untill I fall astray... Somwhere I belong... Where I can always live this way... Always astray... Hope ya like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiritbreeze Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Hmmm, it's interesting. I like how each line just sort of tails off... like that. :D Could just be me, but it sounds more like a song. With the right music, it could be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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