Super_Android18 Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 ANDROID EMOTION by Crissy Rizzotto ~As i stand all alone, cold and darkness surround me, and i shiver as i wonder, where you brother of mine? i need you now, for you alone were the one who understood me, you alone looked past the machine, and saw the human lying hidden within. my heart is being pulled in two different directions, i don't know what i should do. i know you would know though, so why did you have to leave me 17? why couldn't you stay? i wish someone would just deactivate me, maybe then the pain would end.~ ~deep inside, i keep telling myself that you'll come back, that i will be able to hear your voice just once more, even though i know it is hopeless.~ ~there is a human, krillen is his name, he says he loves me, what is love? is it the terrible pain and sorrow i feel inside? who is this human inside of me that is telling me to love him back, sould i? you are my twin, my "other half", with you i would be complete, or would i? there are hundreds of questions, thousands of questions eating away at my soul, stirring up my emotions, human emotions. who was i before i was turned into this twisted instrument of destruction? who is this person, this human living deep inside? does she know what love is? if i asked her, would she tell me?~ ~internally, i am restless, and externally i am calm. the pain is amost to much to bear, the fighting of conflicting personalities going on inside, i fear, will eventually destroy me. but you are at peace and one with the human inside of you, you always were. why am i afraid of destruction though? why do i hang onto this thing called life? i it because i am holdng onto the tiniest glimmer of hope? is it because i still don't believe that you'e gone? but i know you're gone, gone forever, o why did you leave me? please come back 17, i miss you...~ please tell me how you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 pretty good....I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super_Android18 Posted November 5, 2001 Author Share Posted November 5, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Forte [/i] [B]pretty good....I guess. [/B][/QUOTE] g... thanx.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NorykoAngelcry Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 *holds up two big thumbs-up with a huge smile* I liked it! :D I like reading poetry about DBZ. . wierd like that I suppose =P *shuts up, after one more big smile and a thumbs-up!* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Macaiodh Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 the concept of android emotions has always fascinated me... i don't really see how it would be possible. obviously, dr. gero must've programmed them to feel emotions, for the necessary neurotransmitters to be released at appropriate times, mimicking human emotions. i don't get, though, why he would program them w/ love or compassion. it seems as though he would see these things as a weakness. perhaps the living part of them evolved naturally. your poem was interesting, SA18. interesting b/c no one really knows what goes on in 18's head. she's basically a closed book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warlock Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 That was a great poem. You don't really get to see much DBZ ones... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cibo Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 Warlock, thats a pretty nice avatar. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Cibo [/i] [B]Warlock, thats a pretty nice avatar. :) [/B][/QUOTE] and what exactly does this have to do with the topic.... nice poem, super android18, keep it up.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Imsirion Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 hey, that was good, i read it 5 times:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lotus Posted November 5, 2001 Share Posted November 5, 2001 That was touching.:bawl: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbz_chick_666 Posted November 7, 2001 Share Posted November 7, 2001 :bawl: that poem wuz very touching, i never even concidered android emotions, even though i knew that android 18 was once a human, and got changed into an android by dr. gero, so she's gotta have feelings of some kind. i think... :D the poem made me actually think of what she must have went through, trying to keep all of her emotions bottled up inside, and dealing with the loss of her brother... i think i'm gonna cry again! :bawl: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kileone_s_n Posted November 8, 2001 Share Posted November 8, 2001 i like it, but i dont think that how she'd really feel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shibatku Posted November 8, 2001 Share Posted November 8, 2001 That was a good poem keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dbz mysticgohan Posted November 8, 2001 Share Posted November 8, 2001 beautiful poem super android18. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now