Discuss Here's a new concept I'm working on

[Vigaku]

I'de like any feedback, as well as people willing to join me. I'm starting a new form a SIM-Battle, I'm joining my love for cars with sim-battling. In a more correct term, SIM-Racing. Takes place just like sim-battles, only the use of cars, structure on our paragraphs, and everything will be done the same. Our races are then judged by someone else who has read the rules. It's just a concept, but I'de like to know who's interested first. I know I didn't explain it well, I did this on purpose, I just wish to know who is interested, and I'll go from there.

[Albel the Wicked]

Well, I'm sertanly not interested, nor do I think that a whole lot of other people are going to. It doesn't really grab my attention. In fact, I can describe this idea in one word 'REALLY BORING. I KNOW THAT YOUR JUST A NEWBIE, BUT YOU HAVE TO THINK IDEAS THROUGH. I GUESS THAT THIS WAS MORE THEN ONE WORD, SORRY. Anyway, what an idea that MOST people like, is stuff that is original. Instead of having Sim Racing, have different alien races race in super hover pods. Something to that, because that would juice it up and make at least a little bit more people interested. Whatever you do, DON'T MODEL AN RPG AFTER A VIDEO GAME OR SHOW! Most RPGs like that, end in disaster unless they are REALLY good. So, there is some pointers for the newest newbie on the Otakuboards.

[Vigaku]

I understand, that's why I didn't explain it all, if you wish to see an example, I'll give them to you.

[Bio]

[font=Trebuchet MS]Captain Jack Sparrow, please don't flame members because they're new, and certainly don't flame them because they're trying new ideas. In fact, don't flame anyone at all.

Vigaku, try anything you want. New ideas are always welcome.
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[Vigaku]

Thank you, I will. Here are the rules of SIM-Racing. I'de like any feedback at all.

SRS STREET RACING SYNDICATE (NEXT SAGA)

*The cold streets of Tokyo are swarming with the buzzing sounds of the Japanese import scene. Two rival syndicates are at large, taking up all the gil and the respect is their goal. The tall ladder to success is on every racers mind, bu to get there they will need a strong foundation which consists of a great leader, and loyal teamates.South of Shinjuku lies the headquarters of Strife, leader of the Tokyo Strife Henshins. His massive state of the art garage towers over the ocean view. Just north of Strife's garage are the headquarters of the Tokyo Knights. Their leader Mov and Dante run a successful rival syndicate. Across the globe however there are racing syndicates with different ideas, different cars, and different motives. The street racer to beat them all will be respected and showered with moneyand women. Let's race.*


New rules: Only Rice Rockets(Japanese cars) will be allowed to participate. Although when we move out of Tokyo there will be different cars to choose from. You must pick sides for being an independent racer will get you harmed quickly. Races are done in the matter of two to three paragraphs with as much detail as possible. Two judges will be picked to judge the race. Judging is done by how much detail, and how the racer used his car. Like was he one with his car and such. No car will be allowed to participate if it is tuned to much. This isn't fantasy racing. Which brings me to my next rule. You may only race cars, and similier automobiles, no shopping carts, go carts, tractors etc. etc.

Minor note, you must, I repeat, must type in the name of the syndicate your in, your car stats, your wins and losses in your signature.

[Albel the Wicked]

OK, I admit, that the newbie comments WERE harsh, but other then that, I was pretty much giving my opinion. Isn't that what you asked for? Well, I gave you my opionated answer. OK, well, let's take a look at your examples....*looks at examples, while muttering somthing about rum* Well, it seems that these examples are much better then just saying that it is like modeled after Sim racing. If you put these in first, I probably wouldn't have put such a harsh opinion on. I like the syndicate idea. In fact, it seems pretty cool. Is going to be futuristic? Like, will they be hovor cars? I think that they should be. That would be awesome. Stuff that is like F-Zero always catches MY attention. Well, there is my second opinion on your more detailed examples.

[Vigaku]

Sorry, should've been more on detail, but no, futurisitc cars aren't added yet.