Discuss Kingdom Hearts RP I am working on

[naota]

[COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][SIZE=1] [I] "Can you Hear it.............the heartless are back....."

Far into the future on a world of paradise where no crimes to abide with and there is friendship and laughter everywhere the one who holds "the key" which is Sora and his group Donald and Goofy were roaming the world to make sure they would destroy any heartless and they were actually in on the cross roads on a gloomy night walking towards a city that was near by. A cloaked figure known as the "Silver Haired Unknown" appearend infront of them in a electrical black mist and stopped them.

He took off his hood to find out it was Tycole who was working undercover for the unknowns.

"The door to the light...........it will be destroyed. But its not Ansem its the Neo king mickey" he said in a deep voice

"Where are they and who is neo king mickey.....wait king mickey!?" Sora screamed the first part then said the other part confused

"Mickey has been taken over by the neo heartless by staying there too long, they were slowly eating out his heart" Tycole said in a deep voice

Tycole dissappeared into the air leaving Sora to find this all himself,and Sora assumed the heartless were back along with a new breed of heartless.[/I]
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Can you all help me on this I am trying to turn this into a great rp.

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[Sora]

It's a nice idea, but you could definantly use a lot more information and a full background before you start. If you don't have those it may never end. Ummm.... in the begining (the sign-up) you'd need to summarize what happened in the game for those that don't know. You'll need a list of people that need to be in it. You need to have at least a picture or two of heartless or different kinds of heartless. If I'm not mistaken Riku got stuck in the door too right? Well if that's the case then what happens to him? What happens to Sora and all of them when they have to say good-bye (Goofy and Donald)? How does Sora return to meet up with Goofy and Donald (if that happens) again after he goes back to his world, if it still exists (which i think it does)? What happens to Kairi? I think she should become a main character who fights or heals or something but i think she needs to be a valued character in fights, unlike in the game. Well I think that about sums up anything that could end up messing up your rpg. Oh yeah, I would leave out cussing and stuff so you can get more possible sign-ups. If you do start this I'd like to help you out. It's a nice basis and I think it can turn out well if you do it right.


Heh... I almost sound like I know what I'm talking about, don't I? :laugh:

[Hiei23]

yes I will help you wean do we start
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[/size] [color=DarkOliveGreen][size=1]Hiei23, Please try and make your posts longer and give more information than this. Explain why you will help, why do you like the idea? What would you change? Thanks.

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[naota]

[COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][SIZE=1]Well ya think,of course I need more information. Why do you think I am asking for peoples help :confused: . I don't think I will make this rp on thise forum I am going to post it on another forum because there it will be more popular.[/SIZE][/COLOR]