Writing My Spirit is an Ocean [E]

[Spiritbreeze]

[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]The Ocean breeze[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]lightly stirs my hair[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]as I sit in the wet sand[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]wrapped in cold air[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]under a grey sky[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]looking out over the calm sea[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]breathing the smell of ocean water[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]And knowing [/color][/size][/font]
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[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]I am seeing me[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]Breathing me[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]Feeling me[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]Hearing me[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]I am looking at my spirit[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]as a picture of the sea[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]A place that is Calm[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]and Stormy[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]Dark and Light[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]Warm and Cold[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]But mostly[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Garamond][size=4][color=navy]it is an open place[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=4][color=black]I would very much be pleased if you posted your views of this poem. Thank you.[/color][/size][/font]

[Cyriel]

Wow...how to express..how impressed I am with this. The format through this changes a bit, but it still matches quite well I thought. Each stanza was like a reflection of the sea itself, like each wave coming in on its own time and choosing, different, and yet in tune with everything else. It reminds me of another piece, something called.."Where the World Begins" I think.