Manga A thought

[Guest kyouchic]

Hello
I'm an anime club president and thought that the club would create mangas or comics. Some of the titles are: "Confessions of a Teenage Psychopath", "Elemetals", and my personal works; "Tenshi Realm Academy" and "Demon Return". The closest one to be finished is "Elementals". It's about six teenage superheroestrying to survive school and their missions. "Confessions of a Teenage Psychopath" will a girl, a ghost, and a dog who is just trying to fit in. "Tenshi Realm Academy" tells the beginning of the ANGELICS: seven immortal creatures needed for ARMAGEDDON. "Demon Return" continues "Elementals" with 'Haru Hel'. Tell me if they're good.

[mangakiwi]

Its kinda hard to judge them on the limited discriptions you posted. Do youhave any sample pages or anything?

[Sword Breaker]

umm... welll,yeah, the descriptino was a bit sparse... but... well... frankly... the ideas are kinda frank, overused, and repetitive. Somthing more origonal maybe... the whole Confessions of a Teenage Pychopath... the movie sucked, and they had professional writers... Is that Elementals or Elemetals? Either way, it seems like Mystery Men meets well... pretty much every high school drama ever made. The Acadamy thing... makes no sense from the discription... The other one... is just a continuation of one I already flamed... so no need there...

Sorry for flaming... but.. well... try and be a bit more origonal when it comes to ideas I guess... Plus i just like being critical!!

[Delta]

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[i]Ano...[/i] "Confessions of a/an [u](insert noun here)[/u]" is pretty overused, don't you think? I tend to overlook titles like this when I browse through fiction. Your title sounds pretty dark for something about a girl, a ghost and a dog.

Do post a more detailed description of your project. (I'm looking forward to it!)

Love and Peace! :love2:
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