PainfulLife Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 He put the knife up to his left wrist and put pressure and with a breath he closed his eyes and slid it in a line. He stared at the almost invisible white line as it started to bleed turning into a red mess. That is when it hit him the glorious pain the mind numbing feeling alive kind of pain. That was all he was focused on the pain everything else cleared and he was in bliss. Even as more blood pooled out all he could do was stare and then he wondered was he going to die? No he thought I will not die I will just begin a new adventure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiritbreeze Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 [font=Garamond][color=darkorchid]That is an interesting way of seeing death. Just another adventure.[/color][/font] [font=Verdana][size=2][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess_Keiko Posted October 6, 2004 Share Posted October 6, 2004 [quote name='PainfulLife']He put the knife up to his left wrist and put pressure and with a breath he closed his eyes and slid it in a line. He stared at the almost invisible white line as it started to bleed turning into a red mess. That is when it hit him the glorious pain the mind numbing feeling alive kind of pain. That was all he was focused on the pain everything else cleared and he was in bliss. Even as more blood pooled out all he could do was stare and then he wondered was he going to die? No he thought I will not die I will just begin a new adventure.[/quote] Reminds me of someone I knew trying to escape the reality of the world he was in...feeling the pain was the only thing that he wanted to feel at the time...I guess it was depression. I really like what you wrote..I think it's very sincere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PainfulLife Posted August 12, 2005 Author Share Posted August 12, 2005 [color=DarkRed]All was dark and again there was pain but this was not self inflicted... He must have blacked out while he was being beaten yet again he woke and still those unforgiving fists were pounding on his already blackening skin... again he was falling into the black hoping for it all to end the blood was streaming from his mouth and open wounds slowly but surely dragging him to his doom... this is where I belong... his last thoughts as he welcomed the complete darkness of unfeeling cold.[/color] [color=RoyalBlue] The sky seemed to go on forever past the vast horizon over the hills and the ocean waves...[/color] [color=DarkSlateGray]Breathing in the salty air looking down from the high perch contemplating whether it was worth leaving such beauty behind he stood there feeling the wind testing it seeing if it was pushing him forward or pulling him back.[/color] [color=SeaGreen]Breath by breath he counted how long he was standing there feeling the restless breeze as undecided as he was. His heart was pounding in his head and he knew this was where he belonged. One last breath and all at once everything seemed to stop. The noise of the waves, the chirping of the birds, and the cool yet bitter wind. It all stood still in what seemed like a moment of his own perfection as he stepped forward one last time as the wind started again blowing with him giving him the feeling of flight, finally letting his body fall to the rocks and waves below claiming his body to be yet again joined with the earth. [/color] Yeah...... Ok that one was a little more peaceful I hope it was ok Please tell me if you liked it or not I'm always welcome to constructive criticism!!! [color=Red][size=1]Please do not double post. Simply edit the original post if you want to add to the original post. -- Lady Asphyxia[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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