Writing Once Loved [M - References to Violence, and Suicide]

[Guest Sean]

[SIZE=1]A song about what if loved take its turn, for the worst.

[COLOR=SlateGray][B][Verse 1][/B]
These blood'd up hands,
The ropes so tight now,
The gap so big... i feel i need to,
Jump off, end it all.

[B][Chorus][/B]
Its over now, no love lost
No peace met, no soul set
Its over now, i hate this
Goodbye world, don't miss me
[B]
[Verse 2][/B]
My heart feels broken,
Left in many pieces,
I'm gone now,
Not a piece of me left

[B][Chorus][/B]
[B]
[Verse 3][/B]
My hate now,
It burns me, with feelings,
That haunt me,
But those feelings distress me,
And that razor blade looks so nice now
[B]
[Chorus][/B]
[B]
[Verse 4][/B]
Love Lost Now
Once Loved Me
Lost Once, Love Dead
Hatred Over, Bring It Down
For This Is It......

[B][Chorus][/B]
[B]
[Verse 5][/B]
That razor blade...
That rope...
That shotgun...
All lead to my fate, enivitable,
Death, without Love,
I'm lost, broken....forgotten
[B]
[Chorus][/B]
[B]
[Verse Conjunction][/B]
Slit my wrists
Jamp the tree
Pulled the trigger
Guess you shouldn't have,
For that is it......over[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[vegeta rocker]

You have some grammar mistakes but i guess those don't really apply to songs and things like that.

[Mykul]

yeah, the grammar mistakes matter very little. we could still understand what he was saying.

well, its things like this that let me know this user is a great mind. he's made some of the best RP's ive ever read, and he puts out quality work like this. good work, sean. id give it a 9 out of 10.