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[Sir Gawain]

I've already tried to post two stories on the Otaku Boards. But I have several. Here's a little detail on what I've done, please tell me what you think of it:

Fallen Angel-
Death is unavoidable. But when you're an angel, even death is better than what you have to do. Not all angels are fortunate enough to be mere soldiers against Hell. There is one, who has been awakened. The demon angel, with bloodstained armor, thick black wings, and an unsatisfiable urge to kill. His sword is what he is often called, the Fallen Angel. Luckily, the blade can delve him deeper into his demon energies.
However, when attacking hell, he will meet his every equal: the holy demon! Of course, Satan may not allow either's death. What has the Creator caused? Havoc beyond the cosmic scale.

Dragon Heart-
Many years ago, on the eve of creation, there were born the animals of the Chinese zodiac. King of them all was the dragon. The people feared the dragon, and tried to kill it. The dragon scattered its powers over the distant island, where now they have become awakened.
It was by chance that Shike found her way to the warring states era. With the dragons, will she be able to hide the power that is, the Dragon Heart? Even her new ally Sesshomirou cannot tell. But an ancient prophet will also seek the power, and he has all the knowledge of the dragon king.

Italian Assassins-
In a year unknown to man, the five greatest countries on Earth seperated to the planets. Italy controls what was once Venus and has harnased the planet's ultra heat. Their assassins are the best. An ill secret waits on Neptune. A catlike alien race, not with technology, but with enough numbers to conquer the universe. France, Germany, USA, Russia, and Italy must band together to stop this potential threat.


These are only three of my stories. Please tell me what you think of them. Any possible ideas will help. These are rated according to the state law, which is very good considering. All rights and registrations apply. Fallen Angel TM, Dragon Heart TM, and Italian Assassins TM are registerred trademarks of Infinite Soft, sub section Cross.