Discuss Gundam Wing: Return of Epion [PG-VL poss S]

[Dragons_Bait15]

He he Yeah I know this isn't done alot (i don't think), at least this paticularr title. I think I've done it before though, BUT here goes. And sorry to every one who wanted to do this but this is just a something I want to do. I'm still working on the story and would like comments. Please if you have any thing to add just say so.

[I]Peace has reigned for over twenty years, the gundam pilots and war have long since faded from mind. Relina and Herro were married, Duo starting his own little buisnes son a remote colony has taken an allias. Trowa returned to the cirrcus as the sad clown. and Wufi Chan returning to China to do some reashearch all of them have disapeared from many people's memories like the wars. Qutra has become a powerful emasairy, creating a new life for himself in politics.

A new group of enforsers taking the name White Fang have apointed themselves as "officers of the peace" bringing their insubstantial status above many of the aristocrats. They terrorize the people like rabid dogs, making getting around a living nightmare. These new "officers" consist mainly of young street gang members given the option of going to jail or inforcing the "laws." Each colony has a groupe of these ex gang members that think they're feared. Stero typing the rich and poor mercilessly, creating for themselves enmies and getting on the black lists of many major gangs of several colonies. The officals appointing them are starting to create a new army of these miscreants.

A new generation of gundam pilots have begun to form calling them selves Riders, and have begun to undo the damage to the gundams. Many were distroyed or hidden by the orginal pilots who are now long and dead or in hiding. Thwarting the New White Fang with ancient death traps of mobil suites they strive to up retrive the blueprints from high intelengence "chips." These chips hold memory of past mobil suites and new models based on them. Upgraded models that surpass the more recent, useless dolls.

The small band of Riders are planning to hit a high security base on Earth, this is where the story begins, after hearing about a Captin transporting a small steel box with unknown contents. But their attack comes too late for the box has already dissapeared, the Captin along with it, the compund suffering casulties and damages from an explosion.

The Oz has faded from the mindes of many of the officials , but some of them have a bright plan for the resurection of the scraps of Epion found on a metor around a newly built colony. Though Oz is but a memory it still thrives and is creating a new teror.Oz has been created again breaking free of the officials and getting forgin backup for their projects. [/I]

Ok well, I'm going to be Duo's daughter in this story but wouldn't mind if someone was to be a brother or sister, but I limit two siblings, other then that I'd like to see what you think of it and don't be kind about any thing be as crude as you want becuse I kinda need help on this before I go to the Inn with it. So HELP.
If your a Rider you can be one from the straight or join from one of the colinines that the group visits or a town on earth or you can go Awal like my character. You can be a new pilot but some people have to be in Oz or White Fang for good, and I will need leaders for both.

Ahh yes and please tell me if i'm spelling Epion right.

Have fun with this and Please tell me where I go wrong if I am.

[Sui Generis]

[COLOR=Indigo][i]Hm...Gundam Wing RPG's period have one thing that seems to screw them over more than anything else. Everyone wants to be all powerful and such, and god fighting comes into play. Suddenly they have the Epion Version 387893274 with cannons that blow up 389472 colonies in one blow.

*rolls eyes*

You see what I mean, its rather ridiculouse what normally happens to these RPG's. Thats the main issue, and the best way to deal with this is limit the power. It'd be great to see someone actually get hurt in one of these RPG's (dare I say) or even die. *gasps*

Your RPG....

Well the plot could be developed more, a lot more to tell you the truth. It leaves a lot of questions and although I know its impossible to make an RPG that answers all questions you want to give a firm background of whats going on. I think I get the jist of it, but spend atleast 4-5 paragraphs on the history and such. This makes the RPG much more structured, and more interesting.

I like the idea (if the idea I'm thinking of is actually the true idea) and I'll most likely join it. Don't look for many recruits though it seems that GW RPG's don't get many, or they're a lot of immature people just wanting to blow stuff up.

Well thats my taste on it....good luck, if you need help feel free to contact me through any means necessary!!! :)

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[Dragons_Bait15]

Thank you Lalath Ril, I might want to put that up on question. Ok so, the gundams can only have a limit of four weapons that do limited damage, No destroying mass colonies/mechas/cities/planets/or any thing else with one attack, unless you have like a thousand mechs and you syncronize your attack at the same time wich I might add is nearly impossiable. Nearly, so no godmoding or powerplaying. I have sign up form thing so you can think about your charrie if ya want to join by the time I get this straightened out.Not every one can have a gundam, and some people have to sign up for the bad people. Also needed leaders of Riders, White Fang, and Oz.

[liubei013]

Hmm...sounds like an interesting idea. I tried a somewhat original Gundam RPG by creating my own universe in that respect. (see sig) No signups yet after one day. T_T

But yeah, I may be interested in joining yours but for one thing...

Post you recruitment thread in the Adventure Inn... ;)