PainfulLife Posted October 5, 2004 Share Posted October 5, 2004 Cry not for me I?m already crying for myself I can?t take what I am I can?t take what I have this world is so consuming in my feelings stressed of so much I can?t take it anymore I just want to fade away? Always just fade away I don?t want to have to live like this no more it?s killing me and hurting others. I am so lost and astray in what I think I don?t know anything anymore I keep hiding myself away to try and ignore the pain yet it stays and here I am still in this suffering world that has so much that it could give yet takes it all away the joy peace and unity like I said its killing me and hurting others the things that go through my mind slowly consume me and I have no sense of time I lose track of myself and find myself wandering further away from the truth that I thought would be right? I have felt the truth has lied to me and now that I grow older new things come into play and the cold hard slap of reality has come down on me I feel no pain on the outside yet I?m screaming in agony on the inside. I have nothing I feel that is right anymore it all seems so wrong and I have no way to tell of what I?m doing I don?t even remember what I?m doing here I wish I knew these answers are wanted yet might trouble me? I wish to throw myself astray in the silent self array of hopelessness I don?t feel love I only feel hate I don?t feel happy I only feel sad I don?t feel safe I feel so naked I don?t feel nice I only feel anger. I keep these things to myself no wonder I feel like I?m going to burst I just want to find what I?m supposed to do as I run out of tears and start shedding blood trickling down my arm I feel everything trickling away with it all the anger, pain, and sadness including my life?. Please rate or respond... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toorima Posted October 5, 2004 Share Posted October 5, 2004 That's really good. You're a good poet. The question marks instead of apostrophes is like E.E. Cummings. GOOD JOB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess_Keiko Posted October 6, 2004 Share Posted October 6, 2004 That's a very deep poem..Even though you seem like you're hurting from the emptiness within... However, it's awesome. You have a lot of talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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