Writing Invisible Pain [PG]

[PainfulLife]

[COLOR=Navy]This is a poem I wrote while reflecting on what has recently happened to me...[/COLOR]

Invisible Pain

I?m suffering on the inside yet you never tend to see it do you?

I?m killing myself slowly yet you never seem to notice

The faith I once had is diminishing did you know?

The love I once bore for the world is now replaced with hate

I keep on hurting myself do you notice the scars?

I have wished death upon many around me

My screams of anguish are ear piercing do you hear them?

My dreams of the future are diminishing

There is no forever anymore in my head did you notice?

There is no more sympathy for you

I?m talking to myself do you over hear me?

I?m lost in my own world that I made for myself

The paintings I draw are depressing don?t you see them?

The music I listen to I can relate to

I still need your love and attention did you know?

I fight for what I believe is right in my heart

My life is always confusing me were you aware of that?

My happiness is just an act

Did you know? Did you notice? Did you see? Did you hear? Did you?

[PainfulLife]

I'm going to be posting all of my poetry in this thread for now I GUESS.....

Life's Pain

I'm standing here so alone no one's here I seek a home.
Lost in the light itself I'm drowning in my sorrow.
it may be self pity to say in the least.
But I'm here now I'm suffering without so much to eat.
I lock myself in my room hide from the world yet my pain and my memories never are never really gone.
I wish for the end as my pain grows even more I'm hurting myself and it's paining others.
I want to forget or go back into time but it seems I keep wishing for imposible things.
The life I once had so filled up with joy is now but a shadow I once could recall.
Yet here I am now writhing in pain phisiclly and mentally i'm almost all drained.
So I write here and everywhere to try and hold out and seek out of here to cling to the world that I used to love but now hate because of hwat it did to me.



[COLOR=DarkRed]I'm not to sure... just respond if you feel like it... I'm just kind of venting... but the feelings are true...[/COLOR]

[Princess_Keiko]

Both are really good..However, some reason I liked "Life's pain" a little more than Invisible Pain....
I really..wish you didn't feel that way.But you do write good poems.......Well..awesome work, and cheer up...for me? o.o'