naota Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 [COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]OCC||This storyline might not be so good so if people could help me with a story line even change it completely that would help. Yes,I am going down in the ob history for this idea. MWUUUUAAAAHHHHAAAAAHHHHHAAAAA!!!!! ~*~ [B].::Story::.[/B] -In the future on a planet on the opposite side of the sun there was a unique planet that lyed there called "Myth". This planet was conisidered paradise to earthers who traveled there since they discovered this planet a long time ago. This planet had a big planet right next to it to sheild it from meteors and this was the first planet found that had life like earth. But this planet had much more beutiful scenes and areas than earth with much more unique beings than humans. Untill one day a being born from darkness known as a "moon drift" (which was a rare race) started to make chaos occur around this planet by spawning monsters that he made using dark magic and alchemy. This was going on for 1 year to them which was 12 months and 18 days in the human world and then the whole planet went into chaos. The monsters were trying to destoy anything they could and there was multiple wars going around the world and where ever the being who created these monsters whos name was Denshi Sutaru he would leave a sign that said "Darkness" in their planets main language. Denshi then created a team of extrodinary fighters which helped him make chaos all over the world. This is when a vast amount of warriors have risen to fight off this evil which helped some areas across the world stay calm. Even though the whole world was a beutiful placae some of the things that were happening weren't so great.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1] Yay! It's going to push through! A futuristic story... The picture your description painted in my head looks very much like the environment in The Vision of Escaflowne. Am I right to assume that the characters can fight with mechas in medieval setting? Or is this all medieval with a few futuristic references (i.e. flying ships like in El Hazard)? Am very interested! Looks forward to future posts and ideas! Love and Peace! :love2: [/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naota Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 [COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]If people want to they can fight with mechas or they can fight by their self. It does have some futuristic things in it like mechas,robots,mechas,futuristic cars.....I guess you can say its like "Escaflowne". Only thinng I don't know is what Escaflowne is.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mana Posted October 14, 2004 Share Posted October 14, 2004 great, you're finally making this thing happen! I can't wait to start doing it. I'll go over the story and help you out later when I have time. Count me in though, dude. I am backing this idea all the way. I think it's gonna be great. Only, I think we should change the story completely, and use my story. PM me for details on that, lol. :smirk: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naota Posted October 15, 2004 Author Share Posted October 15, 2004 [COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]I hope your story has something to do with ninjas >< I love ninjas lol. Anyway I look forward to it so we can finally start this online manga style rp! This is good practice for those who want to make a manga,it helps train them in things and make them try new things out. Thats why I suggested it on these forums anyway I can't wait untill we start![/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1] Come on, love. Do post the story here so we can have a look-see. A favor though: Nothing too heavy.This is going to be an experimental RPG so let's start with a fairly easy story, shall we? Am still volunteering to work on this project, whatever the story may be. Am still very interested! Love and Peace! [/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naota Posted October 15, 2004 Author Share Posted October 15, 2004 [COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]-+Broken Paradise::The Star Theif+- Have you ever wondered what the stars purpose was except for shining and what they represent? Far into the future where they started to find out more about these new stars and life on other planets. They noticed that when some one dies a star shines out and thats when all of this begins. They found out that the stars have a link to each and every person on this universe and when they announced that world wide the hunting of the stars began. One woman who was a great theif and possessed great magic rose up from the streets and lunged towards the sky. Where she would through her mini capsules,capture the stars, then who ever the stars were linked to would turn to stone and if the star was harmed they would get harmed with it. When this happened they announced this information world wide and now every police man and women along with the whole army are out for this woman. They are giving awards for her even if she is dead or alive. Now even some pedestrians are out for her but none of them stand a chance.....this is where we come in, _ (However much people signs up for this) people with great power has risen and are out to get this woman for what she has done. Each one of these fighters has a grunge against her that won't give up and they want her head for that. ~*~ Just something I came up with,wanna do this idea? If you do I will post an official underground thread. [/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 [COLOR=SlateGray] [SIZE=1]I think these are both fantastic stories to work with. It mixes in a bit of every element of drawing or drawing types and styles. Both plots would work fairly well, but I find something a bit off on the first one. Due how the scenery is it might just be a bit harder. Not to mention, I know many artist who aren't particularly fond of drawing mechas. Or technical draws. However, this concern is countered by the fact of the character designs that could be used and or created. Along with the point of general design. You've put the only worry I could find with any of this. Solely with that remark of relation to Escaflowne... I can't find anything wrong with any of the ideals now. No comments from me on how to improve now. I'd personally go with the second story, Broken Paradise : : The Star Thief. It seems very open to ideals, characters, design, and art styles. Plus I love the story's plot. Good luck, on pulling this through.l[/SIZE] [/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naota Posted October 16, 2004 Author Share Posted October 16, 2004 [COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Hmm,Ok,MysticKnight is working on a gothic fairytale so you should wait for that unless atleast two people wanna do my star theif idea then I can post this at the adventure inn and then the two people can sign up and other people can sign up too. But if you wanna go with MysticKnights type of idea then we can. "Well, I'm still working on it. It's a gothic fairytale, you know, an evil villain, damsel in distress, and handsome hero. And it's a big fantasy setting, where crazy things can happen." That is what he sent me so we should probably make a vote,unless your wanna improve my star theif idea or mystics idea when I get it.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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