Manga The Golden Griffin, and a few of my other manga ideas.

[goldengriffin]

The Golden Griffin is a manga project I've been working on for a while and I've finally bought a scanner. woot! woot!
Anyways...I scanned one of my pages from a piece in my manga and I'd like anyone one who can, tell me what you think of it so far. I haven't finished toning and i haven't texted it yet though.
[IMG]http://home.ripway.com/2004-9/179678/Scan10002(2).jpg[/IMG]
Also I'll be adding manga pages from my other ideas soon so keep checkin back.

[Kei]

[color=darkblue]1) You are only allowed to have one image in your signature. Please choose one and stick with it. Thank you. ^^

2) You may be excited about your new scanner, but in the future, please resize your images prior to uploading them on your Ripway account and posting them. I took the liberty of resizing it and am hosting the current picture on my own account, but please keep this in mind as time goes on.

3) Your artwork shows promise. It appears as if you did all the work completely by hand, which is a sign of devotion, heh. However, you may want to consider using a graphics program (like Paint, even) to do speed and attention lines in the future. They tend to make artwork look better.

Overall, quite the interesting little piece.[/color]

[goldengriffin]

Thanks a bunch to Lady Katana for helping me with resizing my work..guess I got a little too excited there. Next time I'll remember tho.

Also...I'll probably be working a little more on this...trying to come up with the four sheets I'll be sending to Tokyo POP so be looking back for those.

Also if you have any questions or just wanna talk manga I'd be happy to...I always love hearing of what people are doing with manga...gives me a little motivation to do my work.

[naota]

[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Well I think this manga idea can be good but you have some flaws in your drawing. Like when you put the words glare,it could look much more dynamic and exciting if you tried. And it can be draw better but I am not going to nagg you about that since I am not that good of a artist.[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[goldengriffin]

[quote name='Daisuke][COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Well I think this manga idea can be good but you have some flaws in your drawing. Like when you put the words glare,it could look much more dynamic and exciting if you tried. And it can be draw better but I am not going to nagg you about that since I am not that good of a artist.[/SIZE'][/COLOR][/quote]
[B]Thanks for the tip...I'll be sure to remember that when I'm doing the other pages. I might even redo this page.[/B]