Manga Broken Paradise::The Star Theif

[naota]

[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]Just a manga idea I came up with and I will be making into an online manga if all goes well. So far I have done four panels of the whole thing lol,anyway the storyline in below and soon when I am done with an OUTLINE of the first page I will post how the main character will look. This is also or might turn into an rp.
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-+Broken Paradise::The Star Theif+-

Have you ever wondered what the stars purpose was except for shining and what they represent? Far into the future where they started to find out more about these new stars and life on other planets. They noticed that when some one dies a star shines out and thats when all of this begins. They found out that the stars have a link to each and every person on this universe and when they announced that world wide the hunting of the stars began. One woman who was a great theif and possessed great magic rose up from the streets and lunged towards the sky. Where she would through her mini capsules,capture the stars, then who ever the stars were linked to would turn to stone and if the star was harmed they would get harmed with it.

When this happened they announced this information world wide and now every police man and women along with the whole army are out for this woman. They are giving awards for her even if she is dead or alive.

Now even some pedestrians are out for her but none of them stand a chance.....this is where we come in, 4 people with great power has risen and are out to get this woman for what she has done. Each one of these fighters has a grunge against her that won't give up and they want her head for that.
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[Dielover]

Very interesting, but why does she want to harm the world? And why do these people have a grudge against her? I'm confused. :confused: