Manga Sands Of Time (Online Manga & The First Page is available)

[naota]

[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]The sands of time is about a teenager who stumbles upon a stone building and in that building there is a magical hour glass that allows whoever who bears it to controll time. The teenager will take this hourglass and gain the power of time and other powers as well. Now this teenager will have a great responsibility to hold because if he uses the slighted peice of his magic wrong he can mess up time itself. Now this boy is in search of a legendary jewel called "The Red Sun" that will give him great power in knowledge and skill which will allow him to rid himself of this horrible magic.

Along the journey he will be joined be one male two females who will help him find The Red Sun. I got the first page ready which is right below and I got a website for the manga so I don't have to post it on The Otaku even though I still will.

Website::
[url]http://www.freewebs.com/deimosp/[/url]

Manga Page 1::
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/MangaPage1.jpg[/IMG]

(The Normal Version) [url]http://www.freewebs.com/deimosp/Scanned%20Photo-1-4.jpeg[/url]

Manga Page 2::
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/MangaPage2.jpg[/IMG]

I will post the normal version later and the rest of the manga you gotta view on my website when I put it there but right now my stupid brother is kicking me off.

If you want more information just ask. I am working on page two right now the first page was just a flash back which will be happening randomly in the manga.

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-I added effects to the 2nd manga page to spruice it up lol. I think it looks more like an explosion and it looks more dynamic please give me your feed back people!
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[Delta]

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Hey! Great art! Meow! It reminds me of FLCL (perhaps because of your unique style).

I wasn't able to see the first version of page 2 but I think you should try a radial gradient (or whatever) for the explosion.

Love and Peace!
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[naota]

[COLOR=Sienna][SIZE=1]I got the third page of my manga up on the website. Thanks for posting your feed back and I wish I could draw like FLCL. I actually tried but I couldn't lol, anyway I hope I get people to actually keep reading my manga every day since I will have a page up each day...........or atleast I will try. This is the last page I will keep up for today tomorrow I will try and get two or more pages up. Also if you want to see the first version of the second or first page you can pm me and I will send you it. Also this goes for the third page also.

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-Fourth page is up now![/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Dielover]

Awsome idea! I love it *Glomps first two pages* Unluckily for me I can't get into that website *sniff* :(