Writing Days of the Dead Poem [E]

[Spiritbreeze]

I would [i][b]very[/b][/i] much appreciate any comments.

[b][font=Book Antiqua][color=slategray]Los Dias de las Muertos[/color][/font][/b]
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[/b][i][font=Book Antiqua][color=slategray]Candy skulls and marigolds
scattered round the altar
mocking darkest death
When our turn comes we shall not falter
[/color][/font][/i]
[i][font=Book Antiqua][color=slategray]So lets laugh and skip
when the sun dissapears
as we wait for the return
of our departed dears[/color][/font][/i]

I recently learned about Days of the Dead in Spanish. I found it very interesting and wrote this based on it.