Writing Vegeta poems and other crap... [Low PG/E]

[Guest villevalolover]

Disclaimer: I do not own Dragonball Z or the carachters or Rudolph..if I did I'd be very rich by now!


I Stand Alone

I stand alone
No rights to dream
I don?t have the right to do so
I stand alone
No attachment should I feel
No emotion at all
Making me weak making me wrong
I stand alone
Crimes in my past forbids them
My punishment this shall be
I stand alone
But still they stand by me
I?m not alone (anymore)
They stand by me

Raditz, The Long Haired Saiyan (parody to Rudolph the red nose reindeer)

Raditz, the Long-Haired Saiyan

Raditz, the long-haired saiyan

Had very very long hair (Like Rapunzel)

And if you ever saw it

It would probably make you very scared (AAAAHHHH!!!!!)

All of the other saiyans

Used to point and call him a girl

They wouldn't let poor Raditz

Blow up any planets or worlds. (Like Namek)

Then one busy violent day

Frieza came to say (Mwahaha)

Raditz with your hair so long

Make sure that these planets are gone

And all of the other saiyans

Got blown up to smithereens.

Raditz the long-haired saiyan.

You are very cruel and mean.

I hope your hair turns chlorine green. (WHAT?! WHERE DID THAT COME FROM?!)



Fate

Fate This power is mine
I will destroy all my foes

When there is victor, it will be fine

I prove to you your weakness shows

Amidst the destruction of my race

I will show you, you?re defeat was only fate

C?mon try to keep up at my pace

When you?re gone, so will be my hate

Try to hide with the night

Go on try to run

But be warned I will fight

And that is when your reign is done

Try to laugh at me

Prove you can win

Then you will see

I?ll be the one to make you pay for your sins

Try to forget my race

I?ll make you cry

The last thing you?ll see is my face

Then you?ll die

[Moi]

Hmmmm....erm...okay. Right....well, okay. *AHEM* Well, nice work, I think. I mean, yes, great work, lol. These poems, honestly, are strange. They, however, are a bit creative and therefore you deserve some good credit. Now about the Raditz poem, that was strange, but the other ones were enjoyable, lol. Nice work, I'd like to see what else you are capable of indeed. I rate these poems altogether 4/10, nice job.