Writing Meow [E]

[Kwany Kon]

[COLOR=DarkRed][I]Here is my poem on my cat. Hope everyone likes it.[/I] :D

[CENTER] "Meow"
Many days go by,
darkness is all I see.
All I do is listen,
listen for mom to say "lunch".
Today is the day I finally see,
it is very bright.
All I see is a giant,
unknown if good or bad.
There is only one thing to say,
All I know is what he will hear.
All he will hear is "meow".[/COLOR][/CENTER]

[Moi]

This poem is nice, I like it. So how long did it take you to write this? I think I should put up a cat poem, since I have a great cat, too, lol. I think this poem is expressive enough, how many poems have you made? I'd like to see something a bit longer and detailed though, but this is good, don't get me wrong. Nice, I give it a 5/10, enjoy!

[Kwany Kon]

[quote name='Moi']This poem is nice, I like it. So how long did it take you to write this? I think I should put up a cat poem, since I have a great cat, too, lol. I think this poem is expressive enough, how many poems have you made? I'd like to see something a bit longer and detailed though, but this is good, don't get me wrong. Nice, I give it a 5/10, enjoy![/quote]

[COLOR=DarkRed]Thanks for the score Moi. It tooke me about 2 minutes to make. I have made about 5 poems regarding my cats. The first poem was really made last year when my cat was around. :( It has been over a year since I saw her. She ran away one day when I was at school. You want a longer story then, fine here is a poem I made today trying to remember my cat.

[CENTER] "Waiting"
I have been here for weeks,
she hasn't returned.
She left when I was in school.
Why did she leave?
Was it how I cared for her, or
was it the way she was treated like.
She will be missed here, and
is welcomed to come back
She must be hungry without me feeding her.
Her food is getting cold,
untill her kittens eat it.
Her fur must be a mess,
since I'm not there to clean her.
She is maybe scared so much,
since I am not there for her.
I worry about her everyday,
even though my family has given up hope.
She has been missing for months now,
but I will still be waiting.[/CENTER]

Here it is enjoy.( I need a hug. :( )[/COLOR]