Danethol Posted November 12, 2004 Share Posted November 12, 2004 [b] Hi, everyone. Before you read this, I'd like thank everyone who comments for their feedback, positive or otherwise. Anyway, here we go...[/b] -------------------------------------------------------------------------- [b]B[/b]efore proceeding, know this; that there is another world, parallel to Earth, which mirrors our history. Continents formed, nations grew, and heroes rose. On this alternate world, in the land of Altea, a mighty and loving king governed the country of Linarea. This king ruled the country with a wise and generous hand, and gathered the strongest and most experienced knights to his court to protect the light and goodness of his reign. Among these knights was the illustrius Valame, grand commander of the White Legion, chief of the King's royal guard, and the King Maron's childhood friend. However, it was known only to a select few that Valeme was also one of the greatest sorcerors in the land, and head of the kingdom?s Magical Order. One day, under the King?s encouragment, Valame and his fellow mages began projects meant to uncover the origins of the universe. One day, to his shock, Valame discovered the existence of their parallel world, our Earth. Valame rushed to his lord?s side, and immediently informed him. Valame, the King, and all the kingdom?s mages then began to further explore the alternate universe. Then, tragedy struck. [b]I[/b]t had come to the King?s attention that, addicted to his growing knowledge of the universe, Valame had become more and more obsessed with Earth. King Maron watched in distress as his friend and closest confidante became reclusive and distrusting of anyone, including the King himself. One day, Valame finally snapped. Drunk on his power, Valeme attempted to cross over into our world. Broken-hearted, King Maron ordered him to be brought down. There, at the transportational nexus of the portal connecting our worlds, Valame was brought down by the highest generals of the White Legion : Orden, Kurenar, Uriam, and Yarda. Cursing them with his dying breath, Valeme uttered the final incantation, and sent his broken spirit to Earth for recuperation. The Four Generals, though victorious, were nearly broken themselves by the shame and pain of striking down their former commander, and once greatest ally and friend. It also dawned on them that his spirit would indeed heal, and wreak unknown havoc on the alternate world. Then, the King, upon conferring with the remaing members of the Magical Order, offered them an ultimatem. They could travel to the world with him, but a return trip might not be possible. The Generals, ready to sacrifice their mortal lives to protect others, offered themselves, and so sent their spirits through the closing portal. This was well over three-hundred years ago. The dormant spirits, slumbering inside unknowing human hosts, have now begun to break the healing seals and let their incredible powers slip through the cracks. This is the tale of those human hosts, Valeme, the Four Generals, and the incredible story that binds them. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well, waddaya think? Tell me if it's too cliche (I was a little afraid of that). Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kala Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 hey, sounds pretty cool. then again, i am a sucker for alternate time lines/realities, whatever you want to call it. ^^ so this is supposed to take place in the present time? well, far as i go, i'm interested. nice to see where it would go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest WarCraftGOD Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 Wow, thats a little familiar.... all kidding aside that sounds kinda cool. So, When is it set... Future. Past? What? Can we control like 3 charcters and how many characters are there in all. If possible I would like to know who is what general.... Like swords or Spears etc etc But other than that I would sign up for it if it is made. Cant wait Best wishes I.D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest WarCraftGOD Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 Hey kala, i think I've rped with you before...*shrugs* Anyway, I hope this thing takes off soon. Looks fun! [color=Red][font=Trebuchet MS]WarCraftGOD, please work on your post quality. Adding a bit more body would be nice. For instance, you could critique the idea. Thanks. ^^ -Bio [/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danethol Posted November 13, 2004 Author Share Posted November 13, 2004 Double postee...hehe. ^ ^;. Anyway, hey guys, and thanks for the feedback. As for the first questions from both of you, it will be set in the present. While the spirits themselves previously lived in a medieval-like time, they had to spend a considerable amount of time recuperating in our world, and are finally able to return in our present. WarCraftGOD, I originally wanted five players, including myself (four controlling the generals and their hosts, and myself with Valame and his host.) However, I might now have another position open for a normal, non-inhabited human. This would end up ideally with a cast of six people, with everyone but the normal person controlling two characters (the spirit and the human host). As for weapons, they won't appear until a little later in the story. I first want to focus on the human kids and how they deal with this before we cross over into full-on weapon battles. Until then, fist fights won't be out of the question. But when weapons do roll around, I'll have a backstory to all the spirits available, and so descibe why they wield their particular weapons. Here's a summary though: [b]Valame[/b] - longsword [b]Orden[/b] - sword and shield [b]Kurenar[/b] - battle-axe [b]Uriam[/b] - spear [b]Yarda[/b] - bow Thanks again for the feedback, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kala Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 hmmm...that's odd. can't say i remember you. ^^ no...wait...grrr...this is driving me crazy...your name does seem sorta familiar, although that could be just b/c you mentioned it... :confused: i think too much personally, i'd prefer to play the normal human character, and i can definitely say you've got my imagination running wild now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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