_Kiba_ Posted November 12, 2004 Share Posted November 12, 2004 With this knife, I take my life, Scarlet blood drips down my shirt Then I fall, landing in the dirt, Then one day somebody finds me And they stand there looking at me blindly, She was wondering why I died, Then she realized it was me, and cried, And now im dead, but thats ok 'Cuz noone liked me anyway... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainAnarchy Posted November 14, 2004 Share Posted November 14, 2004 That was a great work of art...it speaks out. Sometimes poems dont make sense-they just rhyme. But yours rhymed and made sense. Bravo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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