Discuss Valahrias Burden (M) [underground]

[Heero Darkangel]

This is the underground of my new story..Valahrias Burden....in the adventure inn:

[COLOR=Indigo][I]Valahrias Burden is something I created with a mix of Lord of the rings....but instead of a Ring...there are medallions which hold a unique element...earth, fire, wind and water....these medallions were made by four wizards, each wizard was given a medallion and with that medallion they put into it their own elemental ability....then they created the fifth medallion and within this medallion they each placed an element that didn't correspond with their own elements....so the fifth medallion held the elements of Spirit, Soul, Light and Dark......These medallions were then seperated and given to the Five Main Kingdoms....The Elf Relm, Dwarf Relm, Fiary Relm, Sorcerer Relm and the Human Relm

But there was one who disapproved of all this.......Thorian Wrath... A man who was raised by the four wizards...teaching him all they knew.....he wanted the Fifith Medallion and longed for it...in his mind he thought that it would be given to him....but he was sadly mistaken....for the Fifth Medallion was passed down to the King of The Human Relm...King Sorian....Thorian Wrath became cold and bitter and tried to steal the Fifth Medallion but was caught and then banished to Graedia Island...

Graedia island....an Island situated off the shores of Valahria...an Island where no man or creature would ever survive....but..Thorian did....he survive out of rage, betrayal and jealousy.....he turned it into a kingdom....a kingdom of pure evil...there he created an army and sought out to find the fifth medallion and if lucky to claim the other four medallions but...he lost the war....and was banished to Graedia Island with no return

But now 100 years later....he rises......he wants what wasn't his..........[/I][/COLOR]
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this story had been in the making for a long time...I created it after watching the last part of Lord of the Rings....there is alot to it...and it may prove to be harder than I exepted only because the ones who have a medallion will be sent on quests....of their own ( for those without medallions will be sent on the quests to asset them)....which means that they need to be very creative and have a good imagination...and they need to be reliable........

I'm hoping that this story goes well and turns out better than what i hope for..you may comment how ever you like on this story...I appreciate what ever you have to say on it whether good or bad..any questions feel free to ask!!!

[Sakura]

[COLOR=Navy]I just thought I'd help utilise this thread.

Is there a set design that the medallions look like? And what colours are they?
For mine, I based it on yours without the extra gem in to middle, and I made it green, not really knowing if I should use Yellow or Light Blue instead. Just wanted to clear it up a little.[/COLOR]