Writing The Dragon Prince: Vol 1.1: Return From the Grave {G-light V}

[Guest Hickorybro75]

*...* means an action is taking place
^...^means a character is thinking something


The Dragon Prince: Vol. 1.01: Return from the Grave


Its true what people say, when you face death your life flashes before your eyes. To think all this chaos over one simple new comer?

Hey Sai you getting any bites? Na, not even a nibble sis. What about you? No, not a bite. Well ya think its about time we were headin back? Yeah I guess it is starting to get dark. Let me just throw out one more time.

WHOA!!!! I got something huge. SAI GET OVER HERE AND HELP ME GET IT IN!!!
Ohh my god, do you think he?s alive? I dunno sis he don?t look like he?s movin. Well let?s take him back to the house the master should know what to do. Yeah I suppose so. Look at that around his neck, it looks pretty weird. Can you just focus and help me carry him.

Ugh *cough cough* uhh whe? Where am I? You are at the forest temple my son. Did I die? You gave us quiet a scare there my son. You need to rest now. The wounds on your chest will take some time to heal. Wounds on my chest? What happened? Easy now my son rest now and we can discuss it when you have regained your strength. But I wa want to ta?.

He is asleep now my students. It is our duty to watch over him until he is healthy. You say he was in the river when you found him? *Nods* The Medallion he wears around his neck I?ve seen it before but I cannot remember where. I must research this If he wakes come and get me but do not let this child leave here.

A Haze reveals a narrow strip of land arching over raging rapids separating a young boy and a dark figure. Behind the boy is a small group of children. The children all appear to be very frightened.

I?ll never let you hurt my friends. FLAME SHIELD* A large fiery colored half sphere shield appears in between the boy the dark figure*. QUICKLY GET FAR AWAY FROM HERE I WILL KILL HIM AND THEN I?LL FIND YOU. DO NOT STOP RUNNING AND HIDING UNTILL I FIND YOU!!!!GO NOW!!!! Do you really believe You can save your friends with a cheap trick like that. DARKNESS LANCE.*A skinny beam of dark purple light is emitted from the dark figure shattering the Sphere and striking the boy in the chest.* AAAAHHHHHHH. *Stumbling to regain balance* ^They need more time I must hold on a little longer^ SPIRT CANNON *A large beam of light erupts from the Young boy?s palm striking the shadowy figure sending smoke everywhere.* *Out of breath* I, I think I did it?ETERNAL FLAME of DARKNESS *Large purple flash engulfs the boy knocking him off the skinny pass into the rushing rapids below* Stupid child, now to deal with your annoying friends.

AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa bro chill out. You were only dreamin. Whats your name bro? uhh?Nogard Erif. Well bro I?m Sai Scythe. The girl over there she?s Raven. Fraid I don?t know her second name or if she even has one for that matter, but anyhow you?re at what I like to call Haunted INN. Its, SAI enough you?ve said quite enough I do believe. Can you walk? *nods* Good lets go see the Master he?ll decide what to do with you. Take it easy sis, its not like I told him about the ghos?*Raven moves her hand and Sai flies across the room.


Character Profile #1
? Name: Nogard Erif
? Age: 16
? Birthday: July 23
? Weapon of choice: Magic Radiating from himself
? Nogard Erif?s name spelled backwards is Fire Dragon


The Dragon Prince is planned to have a fast paced story line. Depending on viewer response The Custom Anime Team is planning on turning it into a graphic novel.

The story will be focused around the Haunted House in the Dead Forest. This house is a sort of an Inn for spirits travelling to the after life. The 3 young main characters Nogard Sai and Raven train their minds while taking care of the sometimes sudden and unexpected "guest" that always stop by. Vol 1 will deal with Nogard's past and the hardship he must face when some mangled guest appear.

When giving feedback please consider this is a rough draft and a taste of the speech/writing style.

Chris