Writing Another Time Again [E]

[Dragon Warrior]

Just a poem I wrote about Fall. Hm, silly me...

[size=5][b]Another Time Again[/b][/size]
[b]By Gavynn Brown[/b]

[i]Chilling, wispy evening breeze,
Take away the crimson leaves,
From their home in sleeping trees,
Until another time again.

Pale and charming evening sky,
Drain the colors by and by,
With a season?s laugh so wry,
Until another time again.

Browning, aging fields of grass,
The season and your time must pass,
Silently slipping by at last,
Until another time again.

Chirping blissful evening birds,
Leaving here without your words,
Not so much a cheep be heard,
Until another time again.

And when the winters come and go,
The life returns and things will grow,
The birds will sing and the world will know,
That another time has come again.[/i]

[Boba Fett]

[color=green]I'm not normally a big fan of poetry, and even less a fan of poetry written by young adults (as most of it tends to be not only angst ridden trash but also lacking in any kind of style and/or verse), but I liked this work.

The imagery was descriptive enough to convey the theme without overloading the reader, and the repetition at the end of each stanza served to bring the point home.

Well done.[/color]

[Dragon Warrior]

Thanks. I showed this poem to some of my teachers and some even wanted to read it to their classes. And after they did, they said I wrote it and everyone freaked. I guess it's pretty good. I only wrote it in ten minutes. Who said good work takes time?