SilverCyclone Posted November 25, 2004 Share Posted November 25, 2004 New idea. I want to make sure its original at least. ----- Religion has completely taken over the world. A group known as the Conference have declared themselves spiritual and political leaders of the world. Any one who goes against them is labeled a heathen, and is killed by the Holy Army. They call themselves the messengers of god, but are corrupt with greed and power. The only one the people truly label as the messenger of god is a priest named Soji, who is the only survivor of St. Hilda's Slaughter. Using his gun "Divine" and incredible powers that range from immolation to possession, he kills those he deems as heathens, always heading towards the Conference. His apprentice, a young girl named Akari, travels alongside with her dual guns "Crucifer" and "Purgatory". Both are labeled heathens by the Conference, and are sought after by the Holy Army. But killing them isnt gonna be easy. ---- Thats the basic premise. There's gonna be many more branches of the plot and it'll get much deeper (especially when the St. Hilda's Slaughter incident is revealed) but thats basically it. Any suggestions on how I might improve the plot or any feedback? And dont worry. Soji isnt one of the pacifist gun slingers like some others *cough cough Vash cough cough*. He believes in 'Divine Punishment', if you get my drift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saiyuki chick Posted December 22, 2004 Share Posted December 22, 2004 It sounds pretty interesting!! I got2 questions...is it a specific religion? Or just religion alltogther? The 2nd one...is Soji a member of the conference? Cuz that's what it sounds like in the beginning, but then ya said that both Soji and Akari are considered heathens by the conference...-is confused-Well, I was just wondering. But yeah, it sounds pretty cool!! Add some more to it so I can see where it will go!! ...Well, I don't know if ya'd wanna use this idea, but somewhere in the story, ya should have some kind of thing (really helpful) where Akari gets seperated from Soji and has to fend fer herself for awhile. Maybe have a member of the conference confront her during that time, or something. Anyway, I'll leave now...bye bye!! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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