Jump to content
OtakuBoards

Atlantis (PG-LV)


Anne
 Share

Recommended Posts

[SIZE=1][CENTER][B]Atlantis[/B]

[I]'At the centre of the island, near the sea, was a plain, said to be the most beautiful and fertile of all plains, and near the middle of this plain about fifty stades inland a hill of no great size... There were two rings of land and three of sea, like cartwheels, with the island at their centre and equidistant from each other... in the centre was a shrine sacred to Poseidon and Cleito, surrounded by a golden wall through which entry was fobidden...
There was a temple to Poseidon himself, a stade in length, three hundred feet wide, and proportionate in height, though somewhat outlandish in appearance. The outside of it was covered all over in silver, except for the figures on the pediment which were covered with gold... Round the temple were statues of all the original ten kings and their wives, and many others dedicated by kings and private persons belonging to the city and its dominions...?
?'Two springs, hot and cold, provided an unlimited supply of water for appropriate purposes, remarkable for its agreeable quality and excellence; and this they made available by surrounding it with suitable buildings and plantations, leading some of it into basins in the open air and some of it into covered hot baths for winter use.
Here seperate accommodation was provided for royalty and commoners, and, again, for women, for horses, and for other beasts of burden...
?The outflow they led into the grove of Poseidon, which (because of the goodness of the soil) was full of trees of marvellous beauty and height, and also channelled it to the outer ring-islands by aquaducts at the bridges. On each of these ring islands they had built many temples for different gods, and many gardens and areas for exercise some for men and some for horses... Finally, there were dockyards full of triremes and their equipment, all in good shape...'
'Beyond the three outer harbours there was a wall, beginning at the sea and running right round in a circle, at a uniform distance of fifty stades from the largest ring and harbour and returning in on itself at the mouth of the canal to the sea. This wall was densely built up all round with houses and the canal and the large harbour were crowded with vast numbers of merchant ships from all quarters, from which rose a constant din of shouting and noise day and night.'
-Plato[/I][/CENTER]

The ground shook under the young girl?s feet. The sky was growing darker and the girl took off towards the center of the island. A man in his late forties grabbed the girl?s hand and drugged her in the other direction.

?Papa, what is going on?? The girl looked into her father?s eyes while they ran to there home.

?It?s the gods. They are angered at us daughter!? Her father gripped her arm tighter bringing her inside their house. Towards the back of the far wall they climb down a set of steps. In the center of the room was a huge quartz crystal.

The girl gasped. ?Father you can not be serious.?

?Yes, you must go inside. It is the only way to save you.? A grey cat darted towards the girl and jumped up on her should. ?Daughter you must get in now. Hector is doing the same with his child.?

The girl nodded. Walking over to the quartz crystal and inside was a bed like space. Laying down she placed her cat Artemis after the Goddess of the Moon and Hunt. Her father brought down the lid and she touched the orb the hung around her neck. ?I love you Father.? Was the last thing she said before she was whisked away into slumber.

The sea rumbled as Poseidon commanded the waves to bring Atlantis down. The old man looked at his daughter now sleeping inside the crystal. ?You will be safe now.? The wave crashed and swept the old man away. Many of the crystal people put one of their family members in were destroyed. Poseidon had conferred with the other Gods before and they agree to let two people live. Poseidon was aloud to chose which two would be aloud to remain alive. He chooses the young girl and Hector?s child to remain alive, but they will sleep. They would awake one day but the years and eras will go by before the two would awaken.
[CENTER]~~~~~~~~~[/CENTER]
?Do you really think we found the lost city of Atlantis?? They scientist asked through his mask to the others.

?Of course what else could it be. It?s just like Plato?s description. It so beautiful here. I would have loved to see it before it found its way to the bottom of the Atlantic.? A female voice could be heard through the headsets.

?Guys over here. You won?t believe this.? An oval shape covered in coral was over while the shape were the guy stood. Clown fish other aquatic life darted in and out of the coral.

?It?s quartz!? The girl stated in shear awe. Knocking a few pieces of the coral away she saw a face. With a quick sweep of her hand she brushed more and more away. ?Oh my God.? The young girl?s face was still as was when she was placed in the quartz.

?There is another one over here. Man we are going to go down in History for this.?

?Lets get these on the boat.? The three worked and tied each piece of quartz careful. The crane had a bit trouble at first bring them up because of the weight but after a couple of hours the team had brought both of the quartz vessels on the boat.

The team brought out tools and started to get the seal off the crystal to examine the people inside. With the tap of the small hammer the top went up. The team jumped. The orb around the girl?s neck blinked and fluttered into different colours. The girl started to move and blink her eyes. With s stretch she yawns and sat up. The cat that was lying on her chest got up and started to clean itself. The girl gasped and pulled back kin fright.

?It?s okay don?t worry.? The female scientist moved to her. ?Don?t be afraid.?

The girl pulled back more. She couldn?t understand what they were saying. She saw the other crystal bed and ran towards it. Placing her hand on a part of the crystal it moved up. The team watched at what she was doing. The quartz lid popped open and the two conversed for a few minutes. The team of scientist could understand the two, but they were sure what ever they were saying was serious.

The girl turned around and touched the orb the hung around her neck. ?Hello.? She had hoped they could understand her now. ?Can you tell what happened to our home??

?Hi. Do you mean Atlantis?? The girl nodded. ?It?s gone it has been centuries.? The grin frowned towards her friend. ?Why don?t we all go below deck and talk. They headed towards they crew eating area and the two Atlaneans began telling what had happened before they were placed asleep.

?We will have to keep the two of you safe. Many out there will try to hurt you.? The youngest of the scientist told them.

[CENTER]~~~~~~~[/CENTER]
Okay you will be playing as either of the three scientists (one girl and two boys), the friend (I left it open so you can be either male of female), or the enemy that will come after the two Atlaneans.

Sign:
Name: (for the Atlaneans some old and Greek name. The Scientist you can do anything)
Age: (Scientist, Enemy Over 23, Atlaneans 18-20)
Gender:
Appearance: (Can be a picture or written)
Personality:
Bio: (Just something short. If you are scientist tell why you went searching for Atlantis. If you are the enemy tell why you want the two and whom you work for.)[/SIZE]
Link to comment
Share on other sites

[B]OOC:[/B] Could I take the friend? I didn't really know what to put for the Bio. Let me know if I have to change anything.

[COLOR=Navy][B]Name:[/B] Alura (Not really greek but closest I could come up with)
[B]Age:[/B] 18
[B]Gender:[/B] Female
[B]Appearance:[/B] [url=http://img29.exs.cx/img29/6524/girl_d77.jpg]Here[/url]
[B]Personality:[/B] Alura is calm and doesn't get angry very quickly, she usually speaks quietly and softly. She is strong minded and never admits defeat, even when she's lost. She's a quick thinker and solves problems quickly. She can easily keep a cool head in a heated argument. Alura's very stealthy, flexible and acrobatic and gymnastic and has been since she was a child. She doesn't get annoyed very often, except when someone annoys her a lot.
[B]Bio:[/B] Alura was put to sleep the same time as her friend, their parents wanted to protect them from the wrath of the gods. They don't know what's been happening because they were encased in quartz and now she's quite saddened that their city has been missing.[/COLOR]
Link to comment
Share on other sites

[COLOR=DarkRed][I]OOC: Here is my post. I guess I will be a scientist. I will change it later on to be more right. Tell me if there is anything that needs to be changed.[/I]

[B]Name[/B]: Paul Monda
[B]Age[/B]: 29
[B]Gender[/B]: Male
[B]Appearance[/B]: About 6' tall. Has short, black hair, and brown eyes. He is built to carry many supplies since he carries the supplies around. He is always wearing his glasses. Is always seen wearing a lab uniform (shirt, lab coat, and pants).
[B]Personality[/B]: He will examine anything for long hours if it interests him. He always seems to get into trouble without him noticing himself. He is very cautious about many discoveries he has found. He mostly is quiet though.
[B]Bio[/B]: He has dreamed of finding Atlantis since he was a child. His father gave him every bit of money so he can learn whatever it took to get to Alantis. He must find Atlantis not only because it is his dream, but to make his father proud.
[/COLOR]
Link to comment
Share on other sites

OOC: I think I'll take the girl scientist, I like this story.
Name: Koko Rae
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Appearance: [IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/azurasea/TheLoner.jpg[/IMG] She wears tan cargo pants, black army boots, her hair is tied back in an up pony-tail, and her eyes are emerald green.
Personality: She likes to be set apart from all others. She is solitary at times, but is quite a talkitive person. She doesn't let anyone tell her what do to and she can be a bit immature at times and has trouble dealing with authority. She has a short-fuse temper and you don't want to lite the fuse for the one reason: She will take it out on you (and you don't want to be in that line of fire, I promise you that). On the whole, she a really great person and is very intellegent.
Bio: As a girl, her parents told her many fantasy stories; including the Atlantis books; her favorite. Later on she took it more seriously and here she is. Her parents did little to support her while she went through this to get here. She wants to find Atlantis not only to make her childhood dream come true, but to prove her parents wrong and rub it in their faces.
Link to comment
Share on other sites

[size=1]Ohkami that fine, it's all good. I see only two-problem in total. Apherion her age is to young. I had asked that they be over 23, so if you could change that please. Other than that its good. Kwany Kon could you put a little more information in your appearance. Tell like what his build is, how long his hair is, it just help everyone get a better picture of what he look. Other than those two things everything else is good.

Name: Calandra
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Appearance:[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/KIttychanann/banners/pics/yurisha.jpg]here[/URL]
Personality: Unlike her friend Alura, Calandra is a bit more outspoken. This always caused her much trouble when she was younger. Calandra also has a natural curiosity for everything. She loves learning and being in this new age hasn't helped to squash her curiosity. She works well with her hands, build and sculpting things. Calandra was also a good runner. She has a soft spot for animals and will protect them with all her might.
Bio: Calandra grew up in the mythological city of Atlantis with her father. Her mother had died during childbirth. At the age of 20 she was placed in the Quartz crystal in suspend animation. There she slept throughout the centuries till the team of scientist found her on the sea floor. She has come to find out that her home was destroyed and that Alura and her where the last Alaneans alive.

All we really need is the last male scientist to began. I foprget to meantion that this takes place int he year 2005. Thank you guys for joining.[/size]
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
 Share

×
×
  • Create New...