Writing Table For Two [PG-13-LV]

[Moi]

This is a story that I make up as I go along, and it will have chapters. I'll make it one chapter at a time. Reviews and comments are welcome, along with criticism and advice. The story's plot is about a restaurant called Jack's Landing, and they serve great food, and, oh, back to the plot. In each chapter we view the same table for two, and we see two different people each time, and it's kind of pointless, but entertaining. It may have a plot twist in the end, but I'm not sure yet. I will post the first chapter later in a new post, so you can go ahead and talk if you want about what you think this will be like or give advice on how to make it great or whatever. I'll see you peoples then, til then, monkeys RULE!!!!!!!

[KarmaOfChaos]

[color=deeppink][size=1]It's an interesting idea - if done appropriately it can be very amusing, and if you decide on one or more particular "serious" themes (I would suggest at least one) to loosely base a "plot" on, it can be a unique and effective way of making a point. (For example - bring your characters round and round a point untill they finally come to a conclusion and/or wall which none of them expected. This surprises readers and proves a point.)

However, wouldn't it be wiser to just wait until you had part of the story done so you could post it, instead of just starting an "oh I have this idea" thread? If you're looking for more material for the story, I would suggest renting "Melvin Goes To Dinner", it's based on a somewhat similar idea.

-Karma[/size][/color]