Manga Azure Sky-my manga I'm working on ^-^

[Colonel Mustang]

I'm currently in the process of writing the first chapter of my new manga called Azure Sky:till the end of Memory. It's about a 17 year old boy named Jillain Chiles the third.
In my first manga he was a theif in both the human world and the magical world of Maysba. Anyway he is finally caught be the GUILD's(a highly religous organization of Elves who keep the peace in this magical world) strongest officer, Colonel Morgan Benjermen Alexander Rhodes. He gives him a choice 1)Give up and he'll clear his records and give him a place in the GUILD.Or 2) Fight him and die.
Jill is a thief all because his mother(an elf) had a child with a human. And that's taboo!
So they punished his mother by turning her into a DRAGON and banished her forever.
Jill steals so that he could find a magical item called Azure Sky, said to return anything to it's origenal form(hope I spelled that right?).
So back to jill,
Well like an idiot he chooses the 2nd choice.
And him and Colonel Rhodes began their battle.

The 1st manga was just action but the 2nd is full Shonen-ai due to me specializing in that department(JillxMorgan)
anyway tell me how yous like it
:D

[saiyuki chick]

Well, it sounds pretty good!! Except fer the minor fact that I'm not in to shonen-ai, but oh well. I have a TON of stories that all have one thing in common...they go absoutely no where. They got cool beginnings, but I have no where to go with them, with the exception of one...anyway...^^ talk to ya later!!

[Colonel Mustang]

*Bowing *
Thank you for repying.
I'm happy you like it so far:blush:
Thanks

[phxshadowwolf]

it definitely grabs my attention...

there are a few things that i'd like to know, just as fluff and detail to the story...
how did jill turn into a thief? the process, the mentor, and how long?
when did his mother get turned into a dragon? and did the GUILD do it, or was it someone else? in which case, does jill have a grudge against that person, or is he just content stealing for his mom?
how rare is the item, Azure Sky? what is it's story? how did jill find out about it? does he have any leads concerning it's whereabouts?

sorry. i know it's been a while since it's been commented on, but it really looked interesting, and i'd love to see this go farther...

[Colonel Mustang]

[QUOTE=phxshadowwolf]it definitely grabs my attention...

there are a few things that i'd like to know, just as fluff and detail to the story...
how did jill turn into a thief? the process, the mentor, and how long?
when did his mother get turned into a dragon? and did the GUILD do it, or was it someone else? in which case, does jill have a grudge against that person, or is he just content stealing for his mom?
how rare is the item, Azure Sky? what is it's story? how did jill find out about it? does he have any leads concerning it's whereabouts?

sorry. i know it's been a while since it's been commented on, but it really looked interesting, and i'd love to see this go farther...[/QUOTE]

Your right, it has been a while.
Some questions I can answer and others...well U know the answer.
Yes the GUILD turned his mother into a dragon, their leader Father Oynx did and Jill has a grudge agaist him.
The item, Azure Sky, is very rare. The Gods themselves made it, that's why no living being knows hows it looks.
And Jill's mentor well...that's on the HUSH. That'll be uncovered further along in the story.
I'd really lov to post the whole 6 chapters that i'm finshed writing .
But I can't that's the rules.
*Sigh* Back to writing the story.
la8ter

[LPpunkrocka]

it sounds pretty cool to me. I'm not exactly TOO much interested in the shounen-ai thing...no offense.