MissWem Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1]Argh.. finally I get around to reading these two charming chapters. I have to say, when you originally mentioned an Australian character I was quite sure it was Baron. Although I'm terribly sorry I'm not a fan of the Aussie accent. I'm also terribly sorry to Baron, in my head I keep sticking you with Steve Irwin's voice XD Aiside from that, I cracked up laughing at the "flaming". Jeez, I thought you guys were better writers than that :P[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Samedi Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 [size=1]Stever Irwin? His accent? On me? You are sooo going to hell for that DerelictDestiny :p[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted February 8, 2005 Author Share Posted February 8, 2005 [center][IMG]http://img193.exs.cx/img193/2937/chp88re.jpg[/IMG][/center] Beads of sweat trickled down his neck, soaking the cotton of his white robe. The cool breeze only sent shivers down his spine. The grinding of the two blades forced his skin to crawl with goosebumps. Drix glanced at his surroundings before looking back to James. [b]"Come quietly, Drix. I really do not want to do this the hard way,"[/b] the site director smirked. [b]"How can I turn myself in if I didn't do anything?"[/b] Drix growled and delivered a swift kick into James' side. The two stumbled back from each other. Seconds passed before James thrust forward, swinging the katana in his hand and reeling it against Drix's. Jumping to his left, Drix jerked his katana from under James' and ducked to miss James sweeping the blade over his head. The gust of wind from the swing forced Drix onto his back. [b]"All too easy,"[/b] James brought his katana down with his body weight. [b]"Not so,"[/b] Drix rolled to the side and jumped to his feet, [b]"Let's dance, James."[/b] The men smiled and charged another. Their blades clashed what seemed a hundred times before James landed a blow to Drix's thigh. He grasped at his leg, feeling the blood roll down. James raised his blade, glancing at the blood-stained tip. One drop patted softly in the gravel. [b]"Good form,"[/b] Drix nodded and stood up, raising his blade to touch James'. [b]|-Meanwhile...-| "Do you have any in purple?"[/b] Annie asked the merchant. [b]"Hai,"[/b] he nodded and scuttled into the store. Annie sighed heavily and looked around the streets of Tokyo 3. They were bustling with life; anime everywhere, manga flooding the shelves of sidewalk vendors, young teenagers running about. The city life amused Annie, it set the perfect scene as she looked for a kimono. A change from the sand and water, although, some bandits still hung around the beach. [b]"This is my finest,"[/b] the merchant limped beside Annie, holding out a silky, lilac kimono with violet velvet trimming and floral design. [b]"Oh my,"[/b] breathed Annie as she ran a hand over the gorgeous fabric, [b]"Solo Tremaine-san, domo arigato."[/b] Annie bowed and paid for the kimono. Now that she had her attire, Annie had to figure out where to find James. This was proving to be the most difficult mission she had handled yet. She struggled to think of anyone, besides Baron, that would know the site director's whereabouts. [b]" :O Annie? What are you doing in this part of the OB?"[/b] She spun around and glanced up to the top of the page, she had been wandering aimlessly and landed herself in the Art Studio. She blinked a few times and turned to face its moderator, Syk3. [b]"Hey Syk3. I guess I was just brain dead for a minute. How is it hanging?" "Eh, you know-" "Nevermind, nevermind..I should have asked, how are you doing?"[/b] Annie smiled and walked up to Syk3, extending her hand. [b]"Me, I'm doing fine. But to get back to your original question-" "SYK3!" "Oh okay, sheesh,"[/b] the mod giggled and shook Annie's hand, [b]"Seriously, I'm good. But what's going on with you? You look a bit dazed."[/b] Annie sighed and scratched at her cheek, [b]"It's just, something's come up with the Bandits. Drix hasn't contacted me yet about- Hey, would you know anything about James? Where you might find him?"[/b] Syk3 smirked and narrowed an eye at Annie. He shook his head and headed back to a thread. [b]"If you really want to find James..he'll find you,"[/b] Syk3 waved before getting back to bounty hunting. [b]|-Back to the battle..yay!-|[/b] The two paced around each other, their blades pressed firmly; neither one budging. Drix's ever watchful gaze never broke. A droplet of water broke the silence; echoing softly through the thick solitude. Then, one after another, water droplets sprinkled the two with a light drizzle. [b]"Perfect,"[/b] Drix grumbled. The rain would only aid their blades to slip. [b]"Ready?"[/b] asked James, and without a breath of reply, he broke his blade free. James lunged, sweeping his leg underneath Drix's and bringing the blade down in a stabbing motion. Drix thrust his leg into James' left shoulder, knocking the katana's aimed direction just inches away from Drix's head. He rolled to the side to avoid another jab before jumping to his feet and ducking a forceful pass of James' katana. With a quick fumble, Drix swung his blade at James. Unfortunatly, the gravel beneath his feet became slippery from the rain, sending Drix down to the ground. Knelt over, he felt the cold steel against his throat. [b]"Good job, Drix D'Zanth. I'm not going to ban you..yet,"[/b] James pulled up on his blade, motioning for Drix to rise, [b]"I made a deal. You put up a good fight, you get to speak."[/b] Drix stood and looked at the site director, a small spot of red stained his leg. He smiled. [b]"Scratch for scratch,"[/b] said James as he sheathed his katana, [b]"Come now. You'll have to be restrained while I contact Adam." |-Somewhere on the OB-| "And that's the basics of the Geisha tradition,"[/b] Japan_86 finished after hours of jabbering, and fighting, to get Annie informed. [b]"Japan-sama, domo arigato,"[/b] Annie bowed. The beads from her hair decorations jingled and tickled her face. [b]"^_^"[/b] Japan_86 bowed and gave Annie a few more bits of advice. [b]"How's Charles?" "You know Charles."[/b] A pause. [b]"Yeah, well, tell him I said 'hello',"[/b] Annie slowly rose to her feet. The narrow skirt of the kimono only allowed Annie with so little room to walk, and she nearly fell over. Luckily, Japan_86 was next to her to catch. Annie thanked her again and steadily made her way to the exit of Japan's myO. Annie found herself back at her myO and looked over herself. The lilac and violet kimono wrapped around her body snuggly, the back of the kimono hung gently over her shoulders, revealing the back of her neck just so, the violet sash wrapped layers around her waist, and complete with a small fan tucked under her waist sash and a parasol. [b]"Annie! Annie! Wait...Annie? Is that really you?"[/b] Corey came running, halting abruptly catching a glimpse of the Geisha-form Bandit leader. [b]"Yes, how do I look?"[/b] she turned slowly. Corey gazed slightly baffled, but in awe. [b]"Wow, I never imagined you could look this pretty,"[/b] he scratched his chin. [b]Annie:[/b] -_- *thwaps him with the parasol* [b]"Hehe, good one, Annie,"[/b] Kane approached, followed by the rest of the bandits. The all touched and chatted about Annie's kimono. Some played with her fan, Kitty played with the beads of her hair decorations, Corey rubbed his cheek. [b]"Eh hm.."[/b] a light cough distracted the group. Annie pushed her way through the group to be face to face with James. [b]James:[/b] *blink* [b]"What are you doing here?"[/b] Annie snatched her fan from Jamie. [b]"I need to speak with you,"[/b] James glanced over the group, [b]"in private."[/b] Annie nodded, [b]"I'll just be a moment."[/b] She turned around and whispered the plan to the gang. Kane gave Annie a pair of earrings that contained the communication device. Taking a deep breath, Annie turned around and started walking towards James. He held out his arm to help her keep balance. They took a few steps out of Annie's myO before being swept to a Japanese-style building. James slid the door open and motioned for Annie to enter. She stepped out of her sandals and into the house. The main room was stark white with cherry wood trimming. A simple, tea table sat in the middle of the room, accompanied by one blue cushion on each side. Annie set her parasol against the wall and took in another breath. [i]Annie, can you hear me? It's Kane, I'm testing this out..[/i] [b]"What did you need to talk to me about, James?"[/b] Annie asked, tugging on her ear. [i]Perfect..to send us constant feed, press the back of the earring..[/i] [b]"I know why you were seeking me out,"[/b] James stepped into the house, sliding the door close behind him, [b]"And I have what you are looking for." "What have you done-" "I've not done a thing to him. Not yet, at least,"[/b] James made his way over to the table and sat down on the blue cushion. Annie followed quietly and knelt down beside the table and took up the pot of teat that happened to appear. [b]"Where do these things come from,"[/b] James quirked an eyebrow. Quietly, Annie poured a cup of tea for him. She set the pot down and glanced around. [b]"Why do you think Drix would do something to Adam? He doesn't have any reason to,"[/b] Annie started. [b]"I saw Drix drawing in the sand, with my own eyes,"[/b] James answered over his cup, [b]"After he'd left, I walked over to see what it was. It was a picture, an odd picture. So, I sketched it out on a notepad and looked it up on the internet. The picture meant 'death'. So, being Adam's bodyguard, I only assumed for his safety."[/b] James took another sip of tea. Annie stared in disbelief. How could Drix have known what the picture meant? He was a horrible artist. Annie blinked out of her trance and poured another cup of tea. She set the pot down and reached up for her ear, pretending to scratch at it. She pressed the back of her earring, switching on the permanent link. [b]"Are you ever going to listen to him?" "No, I can't take that chance." "Can I see him?"[/b] Annie let go of her ear and brushed a fly-away hair from her face. [b]"I'm afraid I cannot do that, Annie,"[/b] James watched her movements. [b]"Why not? All I want is to say 'good-bye'.."[/b] Annie took her fan and started to rub on the ivory sides. [b]"I'm sorry, Annie."[/b] [b]"Very nice style, James. The house,"[/b] she fanned herself, gazing about the room and the rooms beyond, [b]"Very..manga-like." "Thank you. Is it that hot in here?"[/b] James questioned, pointing at the fan. [b]"I get heated easily, and this kimono doesn't help,"[/b] Annie chuckled, holding the fan over her mouth. [b]|-Back at the group-|[/b] [i]"All I want is to say 'good-bye'.."[/i] Annie's voice came over their earpieces. [b]"That's it, let's go!"[/b] Queen Asuka shot up and grabbed sweetreyes. [b]"You know where they are?!"[/b] Sonata stood up and took Jamie's hand. [b]"You bet I do! Manga forum, here we come!"[/b] Queen Asuka smiled. [color=darkslateblue]Oooh my, closer we are getting to the conclusion! Thank you all for your support. I wouldn't be able to continue this without you guys. I didn't feel that this chapter was really as action-packed, or as humorous, as the previous. Maybe it will pick up the pace..I was kind of going through a rough few days when writing this, so maybe I was too drained. *shrug* I hope you enjoy this chapter.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 [size=1]Oh man... I can't wait for the next chapter. And I happen to think you would look very sexy in a kimono. ;)[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 [size=1][color=blue]That she does, Corey. ^_~ I must say, I'm [i]very[/i] intruiged (or however you spell it.. T__T) and I MUST know how this little adventure ends. And my, aren't you the clever one, Annie. Sending those messages to us right under James' nose. Haha! No wonder you're the Bandits' leader! *salutes* Now.. I must go paw at my new cat toy. x3[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissWem Posted February 9, 2005 Share Posted February 9, 2005 [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1]Mm.. this was quite good. In the sense that it was a plot mover. I think it's good that it isn't constant action/humour because it helps to keep the story on track. ~Keep on swimming, keep on swimming :P[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Posted February 15, 2005 Share Posted February 15, 2005 Hmm. A plot against James you say? *eyes darken-- Ooh, scantily clad women. *stare* *shakes head violently* No, I don't think so. Retribution for James must be found. I will not stand for this degrading of his moral character. Revenge must be handed dow-- *oogle oogle oogle* *plot plot plot* *oogle oogle oogle* *plot plot plot* [spoiler]*ploogle?*[/spoiler] PS. Thank you for changing that background, Annie. As much as I love a good ocean beach, it gets a bit tedious to read that blue text over it. [spoiler]*ploogle indeed*[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revelation Posted February 16, 2005 Share Posted February 16, 2005 [size=1][color=#696969]That's quite lovely. I love it so much! Geisha is quite awesome. I love it! I am practically in awe of it now! ^_^. Anyways, hmm...what shall the Bandits do at this moment? What is the task that they shall complete? How will they perform? Who will live? All this next chapter. This is Bikini Bandit #3, Schwarz Araignée, signing out. *BEEP*[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted February 18, 2005 Author Share Posted February 18, 2005 [center][img]http://img185.exs.cx/img185/4531/ch95ro.jpg[/img] [/center] [b]"The Manga Workshop? Why?"[/b] Reise asked after being dragged across the boards. [b]"Didn't you hear Annie? She said 'very manga-like'. Where else would you find manga on the OB?"[/b] Queen Asuka led the way. [b]"This is true,"[/b] Reise quirked and followed. The group rushed about, some still trying to figure out who's teaming up with who. They went over the plan of attack and secondary options before coming to a halt in front of the Manga Workshop forum. [b]"This is it,"[/b] Sonata breathed. [b]"Yo, what is all of this?"[/b] Syk3 poked in. [b]"What are you doing here?"[/b] Kane asked, quite confused. [b]"Annie in a Geisha get-up, who'd want to miss that? ~_^"[/b] Syk3 winked a winky wink. The group just stared. Syk3 shifted. [b]"Besides, I told Annie that I'd help if she needed it,"[/b] the mod stretched, [b]"And from the looks on your faces, it seems you all may need some help." |-In the house-|[/b] Annie averted her eyes away from James'. He stared at her with skepticism, and slight amusement to her discomfort. He stood slowly and walked over to the window to glance out at the peaceful forum. [b]"Where are your friends? Your..bandits,"[/b] James slipped his hands into his pockets and leant against the window pane. Annie folded her fan and lay it on the table. Carefully, delicately, Annie rose from her cushion and turned to face James. The jewelry in her hair twinkled as a stream of light struck the top of her head. [b]"The last I heard from any of them was that they were still on the beach,"[/b] she smoothed out the kimono's skirt and stood perfectly still. [b]"What do you plan on doing? Have the Bandits breach my house and rescue Drix while you're distracting me?"[/b] James pulled one hand out of a pocket and rubbed at his chin, [b]"If that is the plan, I'm terribly sorry. But, I thought into that and came up with my own little line of defense."[/b] Annie remained motionless and kept a cool face. Inside, she twitched. Annie knew that James wasn't stupid; she knew he'd have some plan. She could only hope that the Bandits had heard the conversation. [b]"However, I have enjoyed your company,"[/b] James pushed himself from the window and strolled over to Annie's side, [b]"Your Geisha skills are impressive. I, for one, wouldn't have expected you, of all people, to perform so well." "I'm full of surprises, I guess,"[/b] Annie glanced at James as he circled her. [b]"Those earrings,"[/b] he started, tracing Annie's left ear with his index finger and thumb, [b]"They are unique. I've not seen a piece of jewelry so intricate and detailed." "They are beautiful,"[/b] Annie flinched. James chuckled, taking the earring into his fingers. His other hand reaching for her other ear. Annie looked towards the window, hoping to see some sign of the Bandits. She only saw the flowers of the peaceful garden. [b]"They feel heavy, too. Don't your earlobes ache?"[/b] James pulled on one. The earrings were snap-on, easily removed. And they proved their ease as he carefully tugged one free from Annie's ear. [b]"No, actually, my ears are just fine,"[/b] Annie tried to move away, but James held tightly to her right earlobe. [b]"I want a better look,"[/b] he pulled her back, using her ear as his hostage. [i]Guys..hurry up..[/i] [b]|-Outside-| "Okay everyone, Annie needs our help in there. Everyone knows the plan. Communication is the key. If you find Drix, release him and let us know. Then once we have the signal that Drix is safe and free, head for the main room where Annie is. Got it?"[/b] Kane instructed. The group nodded and started for the house, entering through the basement door. Syk3 quirked an eyebrow and followed Corey and Kane. The basement was dim and cool, and surprisingly, very clean. The three spread out, looking in every nook and cranny. They searched the walls for any signs of misplacement or a switch. There were no spiderwebs, no dirt or grime, it was as if the basement had just been built. Syk3 squinted in the darkness and looked for a light. [b]"Ah,"[/b] he grabbed at a string dangling from the ceiling. Giving it one quick jerk, the string fell to the floor in a small, tangled pile. Syk3 stared at the string then looked up at the ceiling. A creaking noise broke the quiet atmosphere, attracting Corey and Kane to Syk3's side. [b]"What is that?"[/b] Corey looked at the pile of string. [b]"I thought it was a string for a light,"[/b] Syk3 examined the ceiling. The wooden rafters groaned and shifted. [b]"I don't like this, guys. Let's get out of here,''[/b] Kane started for a small flight of stairs. Syk3 dropped the string and followed. Corey glanced back at the ceiling, then turned around to see a wooden handle lower down in front of the three. [b]"What is this.."[/b] Kane looked it over. [b]"It looks like some sort of handle. Maybe a switch?"[/b] Corey suggested. [b]"Pull it,"[/b] Syk3 chanted. [b]"But, what if the ceiling collapses or something? You want to kill us?"[/b] Kane retorted, [b]"It's probably a trap." "Look, it's wooden, but it's smooth in some places,"[/b] Syk3 observed, touching the handle, [b]"That means it's been used a great deal. See, I can match the smooth spots with my hand."[/b] Syk3 gripped the handle, indicating that the use of the handle had in fact been frequent over a vast amount of time.[/scientific explanation] [b]"Well, guess it couldn't hurt. Go ahead,"[/b] Kane nodded. Syk3 pulled down on the handle and let go. It quickly retracted up into the ceiling. There was a silence. [b]"Oh, that worked,"[/b] Corey grumbled. But the quiet basement filled with a mechanical sound, as if the walls were being forced to move. The three looked at each other, then at the wall in front of them. It groaned and slowly began to open like a door. The three leaned to their left to peer into the opening. A soft light was all that was seen. A small speckle of brightness cast against a sheet of black. [b]"Syk3, you go check it out,"[/b] Kane pushed him forward. [b]"Why me?!" "Because, you're a mod. If you die, there's one position open."[/b] [/morbid plan] [b]|-James and Annie-|[/b] James gripped at Annie's shoulder with his free hand and examined the elaborate earring in his other. After a few uneasy moments, James let his paralyzing grip loose and Annie wretched herself away. [b]"Smart, Annie, very smart. Using your earrings as a disguise for communication devices. I am impressed further,"[/b] James smirked, tossing the earring to the floor. He advanced on her, jerking the other earring from her, [b]"I know your friends are in my house. What do you think they'd do without their leader?"[/b] James rest one hand around Annie's throat, squeezing slightly. Annie could feel her pulse quicken, her face flushed warm with fear. Impulsively, Annie stumbled backward. Her kimono constricting her balance, sending her back against the wall. She gripped onto James' forearm, his hand gradually tightening. [b]"Answer me,"[/b] he leant into Annie, lifting her face with his other hand. [b]"They'd continue with their mission,"[/b] she spoke softly. James reached behind his back and pulled a small dagger from a hidden holster. He rest the blade against Annie's cheek, pressing gently; not enough to cut her skin. She stared into his eyes, trying to keep her body relaxed. A sly smile swept over his face as he drug the dagger over Annie's neck, and under the flap of her kimono. The cold metal on her left breast forced her to cringe. [b]"I think,"[/b] James looked over Annie, [b]"your friends would falter once they found out you are no longer part of the OB."[/b] [color=darkslategray]I know I've said this, but this time it's true; this was a short chapter XD I think it's the shortest one..but it was really hard to write. Well guys, one more chapter to go.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezekiel Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 [COLOR=LightBlue][SIZE=1]I loved this chapter! You've put a serious twist to the story and it's absolutely awesome! I almost missed the fact that I was in the last couple of chapters, but I can see that calling me Jamie is a lot easier than Methuselah XD I really look forward to the next chapter, excellent stuff.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mimmsicle Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 [SIZE=1]*purrrrrrs* I am loving every moment of reading this chapter ~_^ And seeing James in this ... *gestures* ... is really [I]entertaining[/I]. Ehum. It's really interesting to see how it's come along from when you started it, from being a spur of the moment thing to a fullgrown [strike]sex machine [/strike]... novel, almost =) You're really [I]advancing [/I]with this story and it'll be a treat to keep reading it! [/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Samedi Posted February 19, 2005 Share Posted February 19, 2005 [size=1]Woah...James has a vicious side, doesn't he :p I only had one problem with the language in the story...you used 'quirked' twice, and neither time was it appropriate ~_^ Reise would have 'quipped', and Syk would have 'cocked'. Aside from that, it was an enjoyable read.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Asphyxia Posted February 19, 2005 Share Posted February 19, 2005 [font=Verdana][size=1]Okay, it's not a bad chapter, but one thing just gets to me like no other misspelling/bad punctuation/incorrect grammar does; drug. I've seen it done before -- you aren't the only one -- and every time it happens I physically [i]wince[/i]. Drug is not and never will be [in my book] the past tense of drag. You can drag someone all over OB if you like, but unless you're willing to involve narcotics, you cannot drug someone all over OB. ^.~[/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1]The past tense of drag is dragged. [i]They dragged him to the bus-stop kicking and screaming[/i].[/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1]Drug is something that's generally illegal or in medicine. [And the past tense of drug is drugged. ^_^] [/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1]But yeah. It's not bad. I haven't read all of the story yet, but drug just gets me, so I had to posts on the merits of that, lol. Will probably send another post your way once I've finished reading the story.[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted February 19, 2005 Author Share Posted February 19, 2005 [color=darkslategray]Thanks Lady, I edited that word after thinking on what you said. Damn the school system! I didn't change "quirked". Baron, I'm sorry, you should have made more of a fuss. I like seeing you all flustered and dramatic; it's cute :catgirl: But thank you for pointing it out; I'll keep it in the depths of my mind ^_~ I'm glad you guys liked it. I'm not real sure on how I feel on this one. I like the serious tone I have going, but it just doesn't seem to flow to me. Maybe that's just natural for the writer to constantly question their work. Once again, thank you all. P.S. Lady A., if you'd like to read the chapters without trying to find them here, I posted a chapter index of the individual chapters in the Underground.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Samedi Posted February 19, 2005 Share Posted February 19, 2005 [size=1][quote name='Annalisse']I didn't change "quirked". Baron, I'm sorry, you should have made more of a fuss. I like seeing you all flustered and dramatic[/quote] Flustered? Dramatic? *rereads his post* Nope, I'm not seeing it. Anyway, I don't know why you didn't change quirked, but hey, whatever. Your story ~_^[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissWem Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 [QUOTE=Baron Samedi][size=1] Flustered? Dramatic? *rereads his post* Nope, I'm not seeing it. Anyway, I don't know why you didn't change quirked, but hey, whatever. Your story ~_^[/size][/QUOTE] [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1]I know you can get vindictive if you say his voice is equivocal to Steve Irwin's :P that 'hell' statment he made last time must explain for the unbearable heat I've been experiencing lately. Aside from that this chapter is probably one of my favourites for some reason. Probably because I find the James' characters' intensity very hot. Nothing like a knife to get things going.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 [size=1][color=blue]Oh my.. such drama.. Ah! The suspense is killing me! *stabs suspense with a nearby butcher knife* Take that... b*tch. *cough* Yes, Annie. Another wonderfully written chapter of your story. I certainly look forward to the next chapter.. but is it really the last one?! There must be more.. there must! *writes up petition* See you in court-- er, I mean.. On the beach. :animesigh[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 [center][IMG]http://img189.exs.cx/img189/3314/faye087ew.jpg[/IMG] [color=#404142][i]Chapter 10: The Finale of Her[/i][/color] [/center] Annie's skin burned under James' stare. The tip of the dagger pierced her skin, ever slightly to draw a single drop of blood. She winced, and tried to move to the side. But the further she moved, the deeper the dagger pierced. [b]"Might as well--give up,"[/b] James snickered. [b]"No. Drix will be set free, with no charges,"[/b] Annie glared, [b]"I don't care what happens to me. Just as long as you let him go." "Quite the martyr, Annie. You'd do this for an OB criminal?"[/b] scowled James. The tension between the two seemed to drip from their eyes. Annie's mind raced, along with her heart. She desperately tried to think of a plan, but the lack of oxygen was slowly taking its toll. Her vision blurred, her head nodding from dizziness, her strength-hold on James loosening. He smiled and pulled back his dagger, allowing Annie to sink to the floor. He crouched in front of her, keeping his grip around her throat. [b]"You didn't answer. Such disrespect,"[/b] James waved the dagger mockingly, [b]"Not good for a Geisha." "He's..not a criminal.."[/b] Annie breathed, her hand slowly sinking to her side. [b]"Plotting to harm Adam? You don't find that criminal? You really disappoint me,"[/b] he hissed. [b]"I'm telling you..you have the wrong..person, James.."[/b] Annie tried to sway. Her attempts only seemed to anger the site director even more. This became more relevant when he threw the dagger at the wall cenimeters from Annie's face. [b]"You will go down, Annie. And Drix shall accompany you." |-In the basement..-|[/b] After moments of bickering and arguing with Syk3, he finally relented. [b]"Fine, I will do this. Only because you two are pussies,"[/b] the mod marched triumphantly into the darkness. Corey and Kane smiled happily, following after Syk3. The room, or lair, or wherever they were was damp and musty; just as one would expect from a spooky, unknown--place. The three treaded carefully, their eyes slowly adjusting to the darkness. Not one sound was heard, other than their footsteps. [b]"I wonder how the girls are doing.."[/b] Kane wondered aloud. [b]"Hopefully, better than us,"[/b] Syk3 grumbled, still being pushed ahead. [b]|-Elsewhere..-| "Where are we?"[/b] Sonata fumbled in darkness. [b]"I think..we're in a closet,"[/b] Jamie guessed. [b]"Ouchies! ;_; Yeah, we're definitely in a closet, because I just sat on a hanger,"[/b] Kitty whined. [b]"Let's get out of here,"[/b] Sonata pushed on the closet door. The three girls tumbled out of the cramped closet, followed by an array of random things. They stood up on wobbling legs, dusting each other off. The room looked to be a storage room. There was loads of books and papers popping out of file cabinets. Kitty and Sonata pulled out a few books. [b]"These are old versions,"[/b] Sonata held up the book she had. [b]"Really? This book has the listing of members.."[/b] Kitty thumbed through. [b]"C'mon girls, we have to look for Drix,"[/b] Jamie gestured to the door. [b]|-In the basement-| "Damn it all. Syk3? Did you do it this time?"[/b] Kane growled, fanning in front of his face. [b]"I most certainly did not! :o"[/b] Syk3 spun around. [b]"It wasn't me,"[/b] Corey threw his hands in the air in defense. [b]"If it wasn't any of us, then who was it?"[/b] They pondered for a moment and threw glances at one another. A low jingle distracted the three. The jingle grew louder and impatient. It may have sounded intimidating, but for an odd, and unexplainable, reason, the noise never closed in on them. [b]"Why did it have to be us?"[/b] Kane dropped his hands to his sides. Suddenly, the jingle stopped. But it was quickly replaced with a dull moan. The three spun opposite directions. Corey was the first to break off from the group. He tip-toed towards the faint voice. [b]"H-Hello?"[/b] He waited for a response, and was satisfied when the moan quickly perked up to an audible word. [b]"H-help.."[/b] the voice cried out. [b]"Guys! I hear someone!"[/b] Corey called over his shoulder. Kane and Syk3 tripping over each other, quickly rushed to Corey's side. They advance closer, calling out every now and again. The voice whispers almost frantically. The group of three ventured deeper into the dampness; the temperature dropping rapidly. [b]"Who's there?"[/b] Syk3 asked. [b]"Do you think it's Drix?"[/b] Corey hurried his step. [b]"Possibly, just be careful guys,"[/b] Kane advised. [b]|-In the main room-|[/b] Dust from the sheetrock near Annie's face settled on her slumped shoulder. Her mind wandered through any possibilities, unfortunately for her, she couldn't see any. She would miss the fun times on the OB, the strange and eccentric AIM conversations, the friends she had made. Perhaps it was time for her to move on; after all, this was only the internet simulating this situation. Maybe she needed to disconnect, get a grip on reality. She placed her hands flat on the floor, allowing James to finish his attack. As soon as she had decided to give up, an opportunity arose. On the floor, under her right hand, lay the ivory fan. It may not be a razor-sharp dagger, but it may help her. [b]"And last, but not least of disappointment,"[/b] James leant forward to whisper in Annie's ear, [b]"Giving up [i]so[/i] easily." "I..wouldn't be so..sure,"[/b] Annie coughed, and thrust her balled fist into James' stomach. The blunt end of the fan buried into his ribs, forcing James to release his grip on Annie. He coughed and fell backward, clutching his stomach and ribs. Annie fell forward, taking in a deep, strained breath. The muscles in her throat contracted and slowly relaxed from the abrupt movement. James climbed to his feet, still clamping onto his stomach. Annie fumbled over her kimono but stood on her own. [b]"I've..had enough.."[/b] she sputtered, reaching back to grab the dagger and jerk it from the wall. [b]|-The Dampness-| "Drix? Is that you?"[/b] Kane stretched his arms to his side, feeling the wall for any sign of a light switch. [b]"K-Kane?"[/b] the voice questioned. [b]"That is me, yes." "Where the hell have you guys been?! It's dark, it's cold, it's fucking germ-ridden down here!"[/b] The three stopped. [b]"Yup, it's Drix." "Don't just stand there you nit-wits; get me out of here!"[/b] Drix bellowed, [b]"There's a light switch somewhere on that wall." "Which one?" "I don't know." "Well god damnit,"[/b] Syk3 shook his fist, very shakily too. [b]"I can hear the direction you guys came from. The light switch should be on the wall you are using as a guide."[/b] Kane, Corey, and Syk3 searched the wall. Like the main basement, the walls seemed to be clean. This made the three more comfortable. [b]"Aha! I have it,"[/b] Corey shouted in victory and flicked a little switch. Light flooded the room. [b]All four: O.O...>_<....@_@ *blinded* "Quick, get these chains off of my hands and feet,"[/b] the light revealed Drix sitting in the center of the room, shackled to a chair. Hooks and rings strapped the chair to the cement floor. [b]"Now how are we supposed to do that?"[/b] Kane mumbled as he examined the chair contraption. [b]"With these.."[/b] a voice echoed, followed by the clinking of a ring of keys. Four pairs of eyes darted to find the source of the voice. Out of the shadows emerged Kyuai, LalithRil, and Reise. Reise tossed the keys to Kane. [b]"Where did you find these?" "On a silver platter,"[/b] LalithRil started, [b]"We ran into DW. Apparently, he was supposed to be guarding Drix. However, he's quick to turn down that position when faced with two sexy women." "Queen Asuka and sweetreyes,"[/b] the room spoke together. [b]"Speaking of, someone contact Kitty, Sonata, and Jamie,"[/b] Kane suggested and began to unshackle Drix. [b]"Hurry up, we have to get to Annie,"[/b] Drix jumped up, shaking the chains free. The group all broke to a sprint to catch up. [b]|-The main room..-| "You've taken this too seriously, James. And you've accused the wrong people,"[/b] Annie unwrapped the scarf around her waist. The folds of the kimono spilled down, forming a bunch at her feet. [b]"I won't take the chance of putting Adam at risk. If I've falsely accused, I'll find out later,"[/b] James stood straight, keeping an eye on Annie's right hand. [b]"You are vile,"[/b] she smirked, dropping the scarf to her feet, [b]"However, it's good to see your loyalty to Adam. I hope he appreciates it."[/b] She reached up to her shoulders and pulled back on the kimono. Her shoulders the first to bare as the silk slid down her arms. Underneath the kimono, Annie donned a pair of jeans and a white tank top; which was stained on the front with red. (--and you all thought she'd be nekked..tsk tsk) She looked over the dagger and tossed it across the room. [b]"He does,"[/b] the two circled each other, almost like vultures. Only, they did not share the maniacal, hunger-lusted with the birds. Annie stopped, her eyes had caught a glimpse that relieved her every nerve. James followed her gaze and spun around to face the group; Drix ahead of the pack. [b]"What happened to DW?"[/b] James blinked. [b]"You left DW to guard me, knowing that women in bikinis were going to come to my aid?"[/b] Drix folded his arms over his chest. James nodded, [b]"Yeah, that was a goof on my part. But it still won't stop you. You see, Annie's suggested to take your place, Drix." "You'd better not!"[/b] Drix stormed up to Annie. [b]"I need to go anyway, Jordan. Sometimes, it's best to just disappear every once in a while,"[/b] Annie shrugged. [b]"No. Leaving like this, you'll just give into his antics,"[/b] Drix pointed at James. [b]James: *blink* "What's all of this?"[/b] the front door slid open, allowing an all-cloaked figure appear into the living room. The room stood agape. [b]The figure: >_>...<_<..*wave?* "Hello, Adam. You've come just in time,"[/b] James bowed and walked up to the alleged Adam. [b]"Good afternoon, James. What is going on here?" "Just taking care of the problem." "What problem?" "The person who wanted to kill you." "There was such a thing?! Why didn't anyone tell me?!" "I did, Sir. You told me to take care of them." "Oh..yes, yes I did. But, James, I've already taken care of this." "What?" "Yes, actually. The perpetrator turned themselves in. Apparently, you banned this member years ago; for whatever reasons, unknown. He was rather distasteful, and I didn't want to deal with him any longer."[/b] The room stood still. Everyone glanced at each other. Adam sneezed lightly and turned for the door. James and Annie stared after Adam. [b]"This has certainly been a weird chapter,"[/b] Annie shook her head. [b]"All in all, I apologize for my harsh actions,"[/b] James extended his hand and shook Annie's. The room chattered in confusion and relief. Everything seemed to dwindle do a close, and people began to leave. [b]"However,"[/b] James interrupted, [b]"You still have to face judgement, Annie-chan. You violated a member's myO and you've solicited pornography (horrible pornography, I'll add) on my boards. That's not good for you."[/b] Annie froze in her steps. [b]"By grounds, I should ban you. Now, you can go willingly, or I'll be forced to take--other measures,"[/b] James held his hand across the doorway. [b]"You think I'll leave without a fight?"[/b] Annie winked playfully. Now, what's said to have happened to the Bikini Bandit leader is still a mystery. Did she get banned from the OtakuBoards; did she fight James and win her battle? The Boards may not ever know. But what is known is that this is the conclusion. So endeth this story-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baron Samedi Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 [size=1]This cannot [b]possibly[/b] be the end of the Bikini Bandits O_O! Your writing has improved too much, the characters have developed too far to be merely shunted off like so many mouldy sandwhiches... I'll be making a complaint about this >_>[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mimmsicle Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 As sad I am to see this end, you've really gone out on a high note :3 And in the famous thoughts of Hollywood executives "Open ending makes it easier for sequels!" or something like that, hehe. A girl can dream _^_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 [color=blue][size=1]I told you I'd write up a petition!! But.. unfortunately.. I'm too lazy. :animecry: :animeswea And I agree with Baron completely; the writing, the story, and the characters have developed so much and so well that I can't bear to see the end. Soo.. *stabs out eyes* I [i]really[/i] enjoyed how you ended it though. *cough*Stupid hangers.. *cough* Mimmi's right, too, however. An open ending [i]does[/i] make it easier to write a sequel. I expect one! >:[[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted February 26, 2005 Author Share Posted February 26, 2005 [quote name='Thing_one']I Am So A Bikini Bandit[/quote] [color=#404142]Heh, there's no way you can be. One, the story's over. Two, I don't know you. Three..the story's over? If you liked my story, please comment constructively. Tell me why you liked it, or what you didn't like about it. One-lined, non-descriptive posts are considered spam. Thanks everyone for your support throughout this story. It has been my privilege and pleasure writing this up. Thanks to those who put up with my crazy impersonations ^-^, and having incredible patience and dedication. Your support is what kept me posting. And it's because of your support that [i]The Bikini Bandits[/i] is my first, finished piece of literature. As for, "is this the end"? I'll leave your imaginations to wonder..[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sean Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 [COLOR=DarkRed]Whoo! I threw keys to Kane! *dances* Ah Annie, this was your best chapter next to the DW myO hack. You've come so far in your writing and well, the Bikini Bandits was an awesome series. I'm happy to be one, and I'm happy to see it finosh with such mystery. I do hope you didn't get banned though, where would the BB be with our beloved leader. Ah well, so long another OB Parody, this awesome saga has ended (I think), unless you decide to strangely make another chapter. But great work Annie.[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Posted February 27, 2005 Share Posted February 27, 2005 "...Annie donned a pair of jeans and a white tank top; which was stained on the front with red. (--and you all thought she'd be nekked..tsk tsk)..." [size=1]Curses![/size] Eh. Boooo. Cliffhanger ending. Boo. Imaginative story, though. Can't really say much that hasn't already been said. Look, Bailo Fairy! *runs away*[/end Shiji reference] [spoiler]I still say there needs to be an adult version.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted April 7, 2005 Author Share Posted April 7, 2005 [color=#161414]Hey all you bikini fans! Is this a new chapter?! No. It's an alternate ending. Soon after I ended the saga, I received some little complaints about how the story ended. So, in lights of the requests for a [b]real[/b] ending, I've created you all an alternate ending. The chapter remains unchanged, until you reach the end. If you are a new member, or a member who didn't read this chapter, good for you. Now you get to see the ending without the "cliff hanger". Enjoy! [center][IMG]http://img189.exs.cx/img189/3314/faye087ew.jpg[/IMG] [color=#404142][i]Chapter 10: The Finale of Her[/i][/color] [/center] Annie's skin burned under James' stare. The tip of the dagger pierced her skin, ever slightly to draw a single drop of blood. She winced, and tried to move to the side. But the further she moved, the deeper the dagger pierced. [b]"Might as well--give up,"[/b] James snickered. [b]"No. Drix will be set free, with no charges,"[/b] Annie glared, [b]"I don't care what happens to me. Just as long as you let him go." "Quite the martyr, Annie. You'd do this for an OB criminal?"[/b] scowled James. The tension between the two seemed to drip from their eyes. Annie's mind raced, along with her heart. She desperately tried to think of a plan, but the lack of oxygen was slowly taking its toll. Her vision blurred, her head nodding from dizziness, her strength-hold on James loosening. He smiled and pulled back his dagger, allowing Annie to sink to the floor. He crouched in front of her, keeping his grip around her throat. [b]"You didn't answer. Such disrespect,"[/b] James waved the dagger mockingly, [b]"Not good for a Geisha." "He's..not a criminal.."[/b] Annie breathed, her hand slowly sinking to her side. [b]"Plotting to harm Adam? You don't find that criminal? You really disappoint me,"[/b] he hissed. [b]"I'm telling you..you have the wrong..person, James.."[/b] Annie tried to sway. Her attempts only seemed to anger the site director even more. This became more relevant when he threw the dagger at the wall cenimeters from Annie's face. [b]"You will go down, Annie. And Drix shall accompany you." |-In the basement..-|[/b] After moments of bickering and arguing with Syk3, he finally relented. [b]"Fine, I will do this. Only because you two are pussies,"[/b] the mod marched triumphantly into the darkness. Corey and Kane smiled happily, following after Syk3. The room, or lair, or wherever they were was damp and musty; just as one would expect from a spooky, unknown--place. The three treaded carefully, their eyes slowly adjusting to the darkness. Not one sound was heard, other than their footsteps. [b]"I wonder how the girls are doing.."[/b] Kane wondered aloud. [b]"Hopefully, better than us,"[/b] Syk3 grumbled, still being pushed ahead. [b]|-Elsewhere..-| "Where are we?"[/b] Sonata fumbled in darkness. [b]"I think..we're in a closet,"[/b] Jamie guessed. [b]"Ouchies! ;_; Yeah, we're definitely in a closet, because I just sat on a hanger,"[/b] Kitty whined. [b]"Let's get out of here,"[/b] Sonata pushed on the closet door. The three girls tumbled out of the cramped closet, followed by an array of random things. They stood up on wobbling legs, dusting each other off. The room looked to be a storage room. There was loads of books and papers popping out of file cabinets. Kitty and Sonata pulled out a few books. [b]"These are old versions,"[/b] Sonata held up the book she had. [b]"Really? This book has the listing of members.."[/b] Kitty thumbed through. [b]"C'mon girls, we have to look for Drix,"[/b] Jamie gestured to the door. [b]|-In the basement-| "Damn it all. Syk3? Did you do it this time?"[/b] Kane growled, fanning in front of his face. [b]"I most certainly did not! :o"[/b] Syk3 spun around. [b]"It wasn't me,"[/b] Corey threw his hands in the air in defense. [b]"If it wasn't any of us, then who was it?"[/b] They pondered for a moment and threw glances at one another. A low jingle distracted the three. The jingle grew louder and impatient. It may have sounded intimidating, but for an odd, and unexplainable, reason, the noise never closed in on them. [b]"Why did it have to be us?"[/b] Kane dropped his hands to his sides. Suddenly, the jingle stopped. But it was quickly replaced with a dull moan. The three spun opposite directions. Corey was the first to break off from the group. He tip-toed towards the faint voice. [b]"H-Hello?"[/b] He waited for a response, and was satisfied when the moan quickly perked up to an audible word. [b]"H-help.."[/b] the voice cried out. [b]"Guys! I hear someone!"[/b] Corey called over his shoulder. Kane and Syk3 tripping over each other, quickly rushed to Corey's side. They advance closer, calling out every now and again. The voice whispers almost frantically. The group of three ventured deeper into the dampness; the temperature dropping rapidly. [b]"Who's there?"[/b] Syk3 asked. [b]"Do you think it's Drix?"[/b] Corey hurried his step. [b]"Possibly, just be careful guys,"[/b] Kane advised. [b]|-In the main room-|[/b] Dust from the sheetrock near Annie's face settled on her slumped shoulder. Her mind wandered through any possibilities, unfortunately for her, she couldn't see any. She would miss the fun times on the OB, the strange and eccentric AIM conversations, the friends she had made. Perhaps it was time for her to move on; after all, this was only the internet simulating this situation. Maybe she needed to disconnect, get a grip on reality. She placed her hands flat on the floor, allowing James to finish his attack. As soon as she had decided to give up, an opportunity arose. On the floor, under her right hand, lay the ivory fan. It may not be a razor-sharp dagger, but it may help her. [b]"And last, but not least of disappointment,"[/b] James leant forward to whisper in Annie's ear, [b]"Giving up [i]so[/i] easily." "I..wouldn't be so..sure,"[/b] Annie coughed, and thrust her balled fist into James' stomach. The blunt end of the fan buried into his ribs, forcing James to release his grip on Annie. He coughed and fell backward, clutching his stomach and ribs. Annie fell forward, taking in a deep, strained breath. The muscles in her throat contracted and slowly relaxed from the abrupt movement. James climbed to his feet, still clamping onto his stomach. Annie fumbled over her kimono but stood on her own. [b]"I've..had enough.."[/b] she sputtered, reaching back to grab the dagger and jerk it from the wall. [b]|-The Dampness-| "Drix? Is that you?"[/b] Kane stretched his arms to his side, feeling the wall for any sign of a light switch. [b]"K-Kane?"[/b] the voice questioned. [b]"That is me, yes." "Where the hell have you guys been?! It's dark, it's cold, it's fucking germ-ridden down here!"[/b] The three stopped. [b]"Yup, it's Drix." "Don't just stand there you nit-wits; get me out of here!"[/b] Drix bellowed, [b]"There's a light switch somewhere on that wall." "Which one?" "I don't know." "Well god damnit,"[/b] Syk3 shook his fist, very shakily too. [b]"I can hear the direction you guys came from. The light switch should be on the wall you are using as a guide."[/b] Kane, Corey, and Syk3 searched the wall. Like the main basement, the walls seemed to be clean. This made the three more comfortable. [b]"Aha! I have it,"[/b] Corey shouted in victory and flicked a little switch. Light flooded the room. [b]All four: O.O...>_<....@_@ *blinded* "Quick, get these chains off of my hands and feet,"[/b] the light revealed Drix sitting in the center of the room, shackled to a chair. Hooks and rings strapped the chair to the cement floor. [b]"Now how are we supposed to do that?"[/b] Kane mumbled as he examined the chair contraption. [b]"With these.."[/b] a voice echoed, followed by the clinking of a ring of keys. Four pairs of eyes darted to find the source of the voice. Out of the shadows emerged Kyuai, LalithRil, and Reise. Reise tossed the keys to Kane. [b]"Where did you find these?" "On a silver platter,"[/b] LalithRil started, [b]"We ran into DW. Apparently, he was supposed to be guarding Drix. However, he's quick to turn down that position when faced with two sexy women." "Queen Asuka and sweetreyes,"[/b] the room spoke together. [b]"Speaking of, someone contact Kitty, Sonata, and Jamie,"[/b] Kane suggested and began to unshackle Drix. [b]"Hurry up, we have to get to Annie,"[/b] Drix jumped up, shaking the chains free. The group all broke to a sprint to catch up. [b]|-The main room..-| "You've taken this too seriously, James. And you've accused the wrong people,"[/b] Annie unwrapped the scarf around her waist. The folds of the kimono spilled down, forming a bunch at her feet. [b]"I won't take the chance of putting Adam at risk. If I've falsely accused, I'll find out later,"[/b] James stood straight, keeping an eye on Annie's right hand. [b]"You are vile,"[/b] she smirked, dropping the scarf to her feet, [b]"However, it's good to see your loyalty to Adam. I hope he appreciates it."[/b] She reached up to her shoulders and pulled back on the kimono. Her shoulders the first to bare as the silk slid down her arms. Underneath the kimono, Annie donned a pair of jeans and a white tank top; which was stained on the front with red. (--and you all thought she'd be nekked..tsk tsk) She looked over the dagger and tossed it across the room. [b]"He does,"[/b] the two circled each other, almost like vultures. Only, they did not share the maniacal, hunger-lusted with the birds. Annie stopped, her eyes had caught a glimpse that relieved her every nerve. James followed her gaze and spun around to face the group; Drix ahead of the pack. [b]"What happened to DW?"[/b] James blinked. [b]"You left DW to guard me, knowing that women in bikinis were going to come to my aid?"[/b] Drix folded his arms over his chest. James nodded, [b]"Yeah, that was a goof on my part. But it still won't stop you. You see, Annie's suggested to take your place, Drix." "You'd better not!"[/b] Drix stormed up to Annie. [b]"I need to go anyway, Jordan. Sometimes, it's best to just disappear every once in a while,"[/b] Annie shrugged. [b]"No. Leaving like this, you'll just give into his antics,"[/b] Drix pointed at James. [b]James: *blink* "What's all of this?"[/b] the front door slid open, allowing an all-cloaked figure appear into the living room. The room stood agape. [b]The figure: >_>...<_<..*wave?* "Hello, Adam. You've come just in time,"[/b] James bowed and walked up to the alleged Adam. [b]"Good afternoon, James. What is going on here?" "Just taking care of the problem." "What problem?" "The person who wanted to kill you." "There was such a thing?! Why didn't anyone tell me?!" "I did, Sir. You told me to take care of them." "Oh..yes, yes I did. But, James, I've already taken care of this." "What?" "Yes, actually. The perpetrator turned themselves in. Apparently, you banned this member years ago; for whatever reasons, unknown. He was rather distasteful, and I didn't want to deal with him any longer."[/b] The room stood still. Everyone glanced at each other. Adam sneezed lightly and turned for the door. James and Annie stared after Adam. [b]"This has certainly been a weird chapter,"[/b] Annie shook her head. [b]"All in all, I apologize for my harsh actions,"[/b] James extended his hand and shook Annie's. The room chattered in confusion and relief. Everything seemed to dwindle do a close, and people began to leave. [b]"However,"[/b] James interrupted, [b]"You still have to face judgement, Annie-chan. You violated a member's myO and you've solicited pornography (horrible pornography, I'll add) on my boards. That's not good for you."[/b] Annie froze in her steps. [b]"By grounds, I should ban you. Now, you can go willingly, or I'll be forced to take--other measures,"[/b] James held his hand across the doorway. [b]"You think I'll leave without a fight?"[/b] Annie winked playfully. [b]"How did I know you were going to say that?"[/b] James sighed and dropped his arm. The few remaining Bandits stood around, waiting for an all-out attack. [b]"So...what shall we do then?"[/b] James tapped his fingers on the seam of his pants. [b]"Well, what is the best way to solve any one-on-one conflict?"[/b] Annie scratched at her head. It had been minutes that the room had been in thought before Neuvoexetere threw her hand in the air. [b]"Oh, oh! Rock-paper-scissors! That always works for me,"[/b] she smiled, cuddling her spider plushie. [b]"Good idea,"[/b] Kane sat down against the wall. He stared the whole in the wall next to him and saw the dagger across the room, [b]"Well, let's hope it doesn't go back to that."[/b] Annie shrugged and held out her hands. James did the same. The two eye-balled each other for a moment. [b]"Who's going to call this bad boy?"[/b] James looked around. [b]"If no one has an objection, I'll do it. After all, I suggested it,"[/b] Neuvoexetere shrugged. Annie and James nodded in approval. [b]"All right,"[/b] Neuvoexetere giggled and clapped, [b]"Now, we all know the rules; paper beats rock, rock beats scissors, and scissors beats paper. We'll do the best out of three. Sound good?"[/b] Corey, Kane, Syk3, Drix, and Kitty (the remaining of the group) sat close, getting a close look. Annie shifted her stance, waiting for her little sister's "go". Time seemed to freeze for just seconds as the arachnid lover dropped her hand. [b]"Rock, paper, scissors!"[/b] she chanted. Annie thrust out "scissors"; James held his fist for "rock". The group sighed, disappointed. [b]"Again. Rock, paper, scissors!"[/b] This time, Annie kept her fist locked; James did as well. Annie's eye twitched slightly. They tied. That meant they had to do another game after this last round. Neuvoexetere chanted again. Annie held her hand out for "scissors"; James chose "paper". [b]"Well, since neither of you won, you'll either have to play again or think of another game." "Hm..how about thumb wars?"[/b] Kane suggested. [b]"Nah, that will turn out violent,"[/b] Annie smiled. [b]"Okay then, heads-or-tails with a quarter?"[/b] Syk3 tossed a silver coin in the air. [b]"Ooh, sure. I'm cool with that,"[/b] chuckled the site director. [b]"All right, we'll do best out of four? Just to make it a bit more difficult,"[/b] Syk3 stood up and walked up to them. They both nodded and listened as Syk3 explained the rules. He tossed the coin, caught it, and flipped it over onto the back of his other hand. [b]"James, what'll it be?" "....Tails."[/b] A moment of held breath as Syk3 lifted his hand. The coin, was facing heads up. Annie won the turn. James winced and shrugged it off. The art Moderator tossed the coin again......*fade out music* [b]"What'll it be, Annie...."[/b] Syk3 held his hand over the coin. His face strained from yelling. Sweat dripped from his forehead, as did everyone else's. It's been three hours and seventeen minutes since the last toss. James and Annie were tied. The fate of her depended on this last coin. Yes, it's only the best out of four tosses, but this was delicate. [b]"Annie...it's getting really hot in here,"[/b] the Mod complained. [b]"Ssssh! This is the choice that will decide if Annie stays or goes! Besides, if you're that hot, go put on a bikini,"[/b] Kitty giggled. [b]"What?! No way!" "It's okay, Syk3. I don't think you could look any worse than Co-"[/b] Kane began. [b]"Shut it, Gavin,"[/b] Corey growled. Drix chuckled as he hapced behind the crowd. Annie eyed Syk3's hand. James rubbed at his temples. [b]"I'm going to choose,"[/b] Annie finally spoke. [b]"Yes...?"[/b] James let out an annoyed sigh; the group gasped. [b]"Heads."[/b] The group clenched hands and waited for Syk3 to lift his hand for the final time. Annie bit at her thumbnail. As if the moment couldn't pass any slower, it seemed to slip into slow motion while Syk3 pulled his hand away. The coin's silvery face glared, prohibiting a clear view of whether it was "heads" or "tails". James was the first to get a good look. [b]"Damnit!" "Heads!"[/b] Syk3 slapped the coin on the coffee table. [b]"Yeah, baby! That's what I'm talking about!"[/b] Annie threw her hands in the air and danced about the room. [b]"Okay, okay. You can stay with us on the OB,"[/b] James laughed and started for the door, [b]"Now, leave my home."[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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