Retribution Posted December 20, 2004 Share Posted December 20, 2004 [center] [B]Paths[/B] The path of life twists And gets lost in the thick woods How many are left?[/center] Well, I sort of wrote this one in 2 minutes. Good for a speed haiku? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moi Posted December 20, 2004 Share Posted December 20, 2004 This is a nice "speed" haiku, lol. It shows your feelings well, it is very clearly stated I think, so not much else to say. Nice work. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shugo54 Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 [FONT=Book Antiqua]Good job, it gives a good description of the landscape. I give it an 8. it's really good. I see you are a fellow haiku writer. well keep up the good work.[/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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