Manga School age detectives

[piro-sama]

My manga takes place in the year 2090 TE(Technological era):
recently a new group of crime solvers have taken over
they eradicate police
and detectives-except a few- they are led by Matsuyo Yuna,
and co-led by her husband Heero
then she is killed by hunters,
leaving heero alone with his 6 year old son
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the real story takes place five years after that horrible incident,
Heero's son Matsuyo Ryosuke has grown to be a clever and somewhat reckless eleven year old
who knows very little about his fathers work.
It changes to a man calling to his 6 year old son, Shoryu Kira to finish his project,
Kira is a prodegy in mechanics and invention,he is inventing a ball, a metal ball which is transparent.
then on to the next page,
we see highschool sports legend of his age Hatake Jiro doing a bullet run:
a dangerous sport which involves speed and reflexes,
then he sees a hunter following an outlaw(the bionically enhanced criminals,the hunters are the villains)so he decides to bag the outlaw
he leaps off of school grounds and smashes into Ryo
then hits the poor guy in the head
for letting the outlaw escape
Ryo yells at Jiro for a second
then they are caught by the outlaw,
who Jiro attemps to fight but is easily tossed aside,
but Ryo holds the gun to the outlaw's head
and demands that the fight should end,or he would shoot the outlaw
then the outlaw wonders aloud if that isnt just a mechanical screwdriver,
then we see that Ryo is afraid of tools of any kind (even duct tape)
and ryo screams then he is hit with the ball,it bounces off him and traps the outlaw,for a little while
then a little comedy ensues showing kira holding a variety of tools and it ends with Ryo fainting for a minute
(I'll end it here-because I want to have something to post later,plz tell me what you think)

[Roxas]

It's awesome! Oh, uhh... how can some be a toolphobic? Any way, I liked it and would like to read more.

[piro-sama]

(uh Ryo's father tryed to teach him how to use tools when he was six but Ryo got a big scratch on his hand and he hated scratches
then when he turned ten he tried to use a hammer but broke his hand so now he gets totally freaked out around any tools
but wait till I post the next part
it will contain LOTS of action)