Guest Dark Man X Posted November 10, 2001 Share Posted November 10, 2001 OK otakuians. I'm gonna tell a story of a 16 year old teen. He is about to embark in the most adventurous journey of his life known as... ~The Transal Saga~ --------- He was lying in his sleeping bag looking up at the beautiful stars that never shown in the city. His name was Mark. A 16 year old that enjoyed the wilderness and the "Great Outdoors." He's been longing for a trip to the desert and camping under the beautiful stars by himself for a whole week. His parents trusted him and allowed him to take the trip. He quickly turned as he saw a snake slithering across a the desert. He chased it with his camera trying to get a close up shot of it. The snake crawled up a rock and stood still. Mark, quietly, crept up near the snake about to take a shot at it. Lightning lit up the sky. The boulder was struck with lightning throwing Mark a couple of feet of the ground. He was alright, exept for a cut on his arm from when he landed. He looked up at the boulder and saw something strange. There was a huge, tube-like, ray of light shining down from the sky. Mark stared in awe. [I]Aliens?[/I], thought Mark. "Don't be foolish!" he told himself, but still wondered in awe of what it could be. He moved closer the light. When he was a few inches away from the light, he extended his arm, trying to touch it. Just as he was about to reach the light, the snake bit his hand. He fell into the light and blacked out. When he woke up, he examined the area. He wasn't in the desert anymore. He looked at the hand that was bitten, but there was nothing there. He looked around trying to figure out where he was. There were trees everywhere, unlike the desert he was in a couple of seconds ago. "Where in the world am I?!" --------- Now, i don't wanna waste my time and finish the story if no one's gonna read, so should i continue or leave it at that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest peekabooicu Posted November 11, 2001 Share Posted November 11, 2001 keep going i want to hear what happens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted November 11, 2001 Share Posted November 11, 2001 that's good! KEEP READING BEFORE I GET ANTSY TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zero Posted November 11, 2001 Share Posted November 11, 2001 Must have more continue it already. *at like Homer* Hurry, Hurry, Hurry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pave-Low Posted November 12, 2001 Share Posted November 12, 2001 please continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted November 12, 2001 Share Posted November 12, 2001 it's got potential... let's see whatcha got Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted November 13, 2001 Share Posted November 13, 2001 hurry up and finish it!!!!!:flaming: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest RyockoBabe100% Posted November 14, 2001 Share Posted November 14, 2001 RyockoBabe: Do it for me, remember what he did to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pikeon Posted November 23, 2001 Share Posted November 23, 2001 KEEP GOING BEFORE I GET DONE WITH THE BOOK!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted November 23, 2001 Share Posted November 23, 2001 OK dude. It's not that hard. You login. you come here, [B]AND POST WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/B]:flaming: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pikeon Posted November 24, 2001 Share Posted November 24, 2001 OHHHH TO O LATE DMX (COOL) I ALREADY FINISHED THE BOOK OH SUGAR!!! Gary Paulen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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