Shredaa Posted January 3, 2005 Share Posted January 3, 2005 Umm... I was bored and made this... [IMG]http://redeyes.250free.com/shredaa17.jpg[/IMG] Thanks, Shredaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 [font=Century Gothic][size=1][color=gray]It's pretty cool... But your message doesn't leave much for comments/discussion. I actually do like the banner. It has a decent effect... and if very well blended. But I don't like how it says, "Step Back... Shredaa OR GET PUNISHED!" It seems to me, that your telling yourself to step back.:D I do like it very much though.[/color][/size][/font] [size=1][color=#808080][/color][/size] [size=1][color=#808080]PS. What font did you use for the Step Back and what not?[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shredaa Posted January 4, 2005 Author Share Posted January 4, 2005 Umm... i used serious in the pixel/bitmap font section at... [URL]www.dafont.com/en/[/URL] Well, Ok, Shredaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 [COLOR=SlateGray][SIZE=1] You always show such rapid improvement in your graphics. I love the quality of your' work over-all. And you've been able to keep an eye of color while making the banner. You've chosen a good image and or source and a good placement in relative to the words. I also think you've done a good job on choosing fonts, since it really seems to go along with what the text is saying. However there are two things, that are slightly off. [b]1.) Pixel Stretch Background.[/b] Forgive me if I'm wrong, but it seems as though you've given into the unprofessional and off balanced 'pixel stretch.' As stated it's rather annoying to use pixel stretch. Using the 'technique' often times makes the graphic, layout, etc. un attractive and hard on the eyes. It also displaces your text in terms of: color, size, placement, and font. [b]2.) Border.[/b] You've done a great job on choosing border type, but it's too light a color. The border it's self seems to blend too much into the background and dose not stand out as much as it should. You may want to try a different shade of brown or use a simple, but effective, single pixel border. Other then those two things, you've done a great job.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shredaa Posted January 8, 2005 Author Share Posted January 8, 2005 Wow.... Thanks... I'm having a good day! Well yeah... the border is bad, but what do u mean by stretch pixel font? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retribution Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 Yeah. This one is definetly alot better than your others, but there's still room for improvement. Let's see... Font - It's somewhat hard to read "Step Back... Or Get Punished" And the position of that is actually, unimpressive. I have no idea where you might want to put it, but try landing it somewhere else. Icon - The Half-Life icon looks extremely out of place here. The colors stand out, and it's in a graphic no-man's-land. And you didn't take out the stuff from under it. I'm guessing it said "Half Life" or something like that. But it's still there, alive and kicking, rather annoying if you ask me. But without it, that space would look painfully empty. I'd recommend taking the graphic out, and making the picture on the right bigger. Maybe changing the colors of the icon, to the olive green or something, making it really big, and in the BG behind "Shredaa." Background - It looks good... I guess, but there's some stuff wrong with it. It looks like its repeating almost, and it looks rather drab, especially the way you have the text on it. Not much to say here. Warrior Dude Guy - I can't see his head... or what he's doing for that matter. I can just see him throwing some sort of cable with a spike attached to it. I'd move him down a notch, so that I can see his head. ::shrug:: And the border doesn't bother me all that much. w00t to you and good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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