Art My first abstract sig

[Shredaa]

My first abstract sig... dont laugh...
[IMG]http://redeyes.250free.com/shredaa37.jpg[/IMG]
Wel... Construcion Critisism (sp... im dumb sorry).
Thanks,
Shredaa

[Retribution]

I like it generally, just a few things you might want to revise.

[B]- The sparkles:[/B] I understand what you're trying to do with the whole "Light Within" thing and the sparkles, but these don't work. They just get annoying. You might want to take them all out, then use a spot-light lighting effect, getting brighter as the picture goes along, until you encounter the words "The Light Within."

[B]- Text:[/B] The typography is rather ineffective for what you're trying to say. The font isn't very good, because it's too small. The words are also isolated from the rest of the work. Sometimes pixel fonts aren't the greatest for abstract banners. Maybe move "Shredaa" underneath "The Light Within" so people don't have to play hide-and-go-seek with the text. ^.^

So you've done a good job, but there are my two recommendations.