Writing Songs/poems to wonder about [E]

[Imp]

I've been getting an urge to post this poem forever... I do want opinion on it...
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The White Pony

In your dream
Deep meditation
Whence your lati shines within
True happiness
Enter the portal
Bleak black silence, dive right in

Stars of distant glee
On tranquil ebony
Train on rainbow, unknown bounty
Driven by your mind
The holy speaks so kind
Please find the white pony

Should you know
Sheer alabaster
Head for snowy, furry foal
Dream and drive
Contact the driver
Who shall feed the train more coal

When you sleep sound there
Go on without despair
Anxiety shall vanish into thin air
The clouds, now none at all
Red mist you can forestall
Recall the white pony

Recall the white pony

Flow through life
Don't lose sight of the light living in you
Gift from God
Let it shine
Let it fly
Use it right
Use it wisely

Lest you stay
On the train ride
Ride through rain and fog and sun
Then you shall
Have the sheer pleasure
Embrace the pony, wisest one

As it grows, it brings
Life's melody, it sings
Guides you through on rainbow, silken, fine wings
Then when you shall die
A star bright in the sky
Goodbye, the white pony

And thank you, dear white pony