GTK Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 so~ I wanted to redo this pic and do it in watercolor or something~ For prints I'm going to sell at a con ^^ Wanted some feedback first though~ Need to fix some things T_T his spine and hand on the right (my right) need fixed for sure... but is there anything else? Sorry, it's a bit dark >_< if anyone has trouble seeing some of the details, I can try and lighten the pic? [img]http://redvoid.com/ori/dead.jpg[/img] image also attached incase my site decides it wants to have issues ~_~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retribution Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Whoa. I like it. When you said mangled, I thought you meant horridly beaten, bruised, and sent through a meat grinder. Despite the word 'slightly.' Anyway, onto more important matters... I like it because of the way you drew the cut at the mid-section. Gotta love those nasty-looking hanging pieces of flesh and the dangling spine! Very nice touch, if I may say so. The face is also quality, because of his left eye. The way you drew it through the hair looks great. Stitches were also good, arching over his nose and such. But the fireballs are sorta 'meh' looking. Sort of ... sketchy, took 10 seconds each to do, etc. But that's a minor detail, and shouldn't detract from the goodness of this picture. [B]w00t to you.[/B] By my non-standard ratings, you get an [B]8.7/10[/B] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTK Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 [QUOTE=Altron] But the fireballs are sorta 'meh' looking. Sort of ... sketchy, took 10 seconds each to do, etc. But that's a minor detail, and shouldn't detract from the goodness of this picture. [B]w00t to you.[/B] By my non-standard ratings, you get an [B]8.7/10[/B][/QUOTE] first of all, Danke danke for commenting and such~ *heart* The fireballs were sort of thrown in and took like two seconds to do *dies* but mostly because I'd planned on making them glowing balls of doom in the colored version (no lines at all, in other words ^^;) though they look pretty bad, now that you mentioned it T_T so I'll go back and fix them on the sketch~ thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted January 26, 2005 Share Posted January 26, 2005 [color=darkslateblue] Ahhh it's so pretty. :) For some reason I LOVE artists who can draw lips like that on anime characters. So...kudos to you! Nice hands as well, although the fingers look a bit anorexic, there. Unless you make him a master pianist, hehe. Anyways, overall it's amazing. ^_^ I actually like the fireballs because they're nice and simple. [b]50 ferrets out of 50![/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandy Posted January 31, 2005 Share Posted January 31, 2005 Ooh, I'm always into pretty boys - even if they are "slightly" mangled. ;P This sketch of yours is really very interesting, as it's giving me two completely different vibes: like first I'm all hawt and kewl, but then like ew and gross! Neat! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTK Posted February 7, 2005 Author Share Posted February 7, 2005 Thanks for the comments so far everyone ^_^ worked on the image a bit more~ hopefully it's better now ^^; I think his hands look a bit less anarexic now? *laughs* and I think one of his arms was too long, so that's been fixed also~ and the fire is less crappy looking as well ^^ ...but now I think one of his hands is too big T_T *dies* [img]http://redvoid.com/ori/dead.redux.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted February 7, 2005 Share Posted February 7, 2005 [color=darkslategray]Actually, I like your original version. The "anarexia" gave it the dark/ "gothic" look. I really liked it. The proportions and shading is just wonderful. Very nice drawing, very nice.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Immelman Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 Nice job on the shading! Especially on the face. If you are going for that half manled-levitating-in-mid-air look it would be great if you could concider a lighting effect. Say light comes from the top and causes shadow on the floor. Also I cant figure out why but, for some reason I would think a guy with a wound like that must have bled or have left his not so better half lying somewhere. I think adding a bit more detail to the background might just give it a bit more of a ominous feel to it. Overall very nice print. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest killjoy Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 i think its a man, thus his hand is suitable with his body ^^ pic very nice, i like it only want to know, how did you draw this by?? kind of pen? thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTK Posted February 24, 2005 Author Share Posted February 24, 2005 [QUOTE=killjoy]i think its a man, thus his hand is suitable with his body ^^ pic very nice, i like it only want to know, how did you draw this by?? kind of pen? thx[/QUOTE] It was done with a pencil ^^ I just edited it with photoshop to make it colored. I'll try adding a BG and color (and blood XD; ) soon ^_^ Thanks for the feedback guys~ *loves* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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