Discuss Idea for RPG but I need help.

[Prince Van]

It's basically what I said in the title, I've got an idea but I need help on it.

I've got the basic plot, and the main thing I need help with right now it's just a bunch of Ideas.Right here's how the plot.there is a city some time in the future(only so we have to user modern weapons, no lasers or anything.This city is ran by a evil and corrupt government, and the laws are different, only a few differerent ones.
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[*]Robbery is legal, if you're not good enough to keep your stuff safe, you deserved to get robbed.
[*]Assualt is fine aslong as they're are willing to fight back
[*]and Murder is alright if it's a fair fight(a Duel).
[*]Arsen is fine, same reason as robbery.
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(My characters a robber and a duelist, don't take my idea)

Well at the beginning I want everyone to be legit but does either of the four except one person, A girl who is the only true good person in the city.Eventually they get in a fight and end breaking one of the laws and get out of the city when they are about to leave they realise there is a force field activated by a Nano-chip(this is why it's in the future).Each person has a Nano chip when they have a fight or rob it comes up with a yellow light, if the person does not fight back or they kill under unequal terms you get a red light, when the red light activates you should be paralyzed until neutralised but it can be defective.This is the case with the characters.

Well they're just the ideas, can anyone help?

[Guest klamndovel1000]

i think what you have so fare is very good and i play meny rpg's if you ask me i think it would be a very good idea to make it so that the player could dizine how they look and even adding asmeny carichter interactions in to the plot would make it more interesting hope these ideas help you out :D

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[font=Trebuchet MS][color=Red]klamndovel1000, please work on your post quality, particularly spelling and grammar -- I normally wouldn't mind, but I could barely understand what you were saying without reading it over a few times. So please, try to improve. ^_^;

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