Manga anyone want to share new ideas and/or characters for my new manga

[Guest DSK]

:D anyone have any good ideas for my new manga demonslayer Koro. You can find more about the plot at my page. My username is demonslayer Koro.

its mainly about a teenager who loves candy suckers and slay's demons for a living.

[Kei]

[color=darkblue]...Oo'

Right... You may want to work a bit on your grammar. Not that it's horrendous or anything, but a little brush-up wouldn't hurt.

Also, you need to flesh out this idea a bit more in order to get some proper feedback. Where the story is set, what type of personality thie "Koro" has, etc. Things that give us the feel you want your manga to have.

We also don't know what "page" you're talking about, either. Do you mean a myOtaku page or something else?

Just keep in mind: It's the little things that make it better. ^_~[/color]

[Guest DSK]

...................ok.........

WHER TO START! >=) I want koro to have a, kind of in your face attitude and a small temper at times, but is a nice guy. He already has a obsession over candy suckers. I guess his wepon of choice for demon slaying is a really sweet sword.

And i was talking about the myotaku page.